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haiku (summer hike)

3/5/3 nature haiku

3 total reviews 
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This is an intriguing haiku which leaves me guessing a little bit (that's a good thing in haiku, I think). I'm wondering if the "ivy sap" is the one who hikes through luscious green trails of poison ivy? Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
    Jeanie,

    I hadn't thought of the ivy sap as a fellow, but as the poisonous plant. I think your version is more creative and funny. Thanks for your feedback.
Comment from L. Sherman
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Great use of that second line to pack some powerful imagery into this short, sweet poem. 'Luscious' is a great word. It conveys liveliness, richness, fullness and vibrancy. Thee green background also adds impact.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
    Thank you, L. Sherman. I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Galactia
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summer hike
through luscious, green trails
ivy sap

I love this very creative, and the 3rd line is just marvelous.

greast job and GL in the contest
Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
    Thank you, Tia. I appreciate your visit and positive comments.