Seeking The Essence Of God
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Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer stays consistent with the rhyme scheme and the structure given. The writer delivers a clear message that taps into the mind and emotions of the reader.
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The writer stays consistent with the rhyme scheme and the structure given. The writer delivers a clear message that taps into the mind and emotions of the reader.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from Whym
This is a complicated style to write in. It reads nice and smoothly even though the meter feels all over the place (which is exactly as is supposed to be written!)
Great job over all.
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This is a complicated style to write in. It reads nice and smoothly even though the meter feels all over the place (which is exactly as is supposed to be written!)
Great job over all.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013