The Greatest Gift of All
Free style poem with some rhymes5 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
This is a lovely free verse, it reads beautifully bot silently and aloud... win well deserved! Great job. :) Happy spring! :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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This is a lovely free verse, it reads beautifully bot silently and aloud... win well deserved! Great job. :) Happy spring! :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, Gypsy Starchild, for your kind and thoughtful comments (love your pen name btw!!)
...and thank you for sponsoring the "Write a Tanka" contest. It was great fun to enter. I enjoyed learning about another form of Japanese poetry.
- Cally :)
Comment from samandlancelot
Life is a wonderful gift from God. So glad you know Him and His Son, Jesus and enjoy the wonderful life He has blessed you with.
Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Life is a wonderful gift from God. So glad you know Him and His Son, Jesus and enjoy the wonderful life He has blessed you with.
Patricia
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Patricia,
Thank you so much - Cally :)
Comment from Lynn Moses
This is a lovely poem, I like how you incorporated the italics to clarify the gifts He has given all of us. This is very creative. Great job and good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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This is a lovely poem, I like how you incorporated the italics to clarify the gifts He has given all of us. This is very creative. Great job and good luck.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you very much for your kind review (fellow winner!) Congratulations!! - Cally :)
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Thank you and congratulations to you too! This is the first time I have won anything on here, so it was super exciting for me.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
A 'very' good poem about the gift of life. I appreciate all that you have said. I wish you well in the contest.
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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A 'very' good poem about the gift of life. I appreciate all that you have said. I wish you well in the contest.
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
and thank you for your kind review and luck wishes. Much appreciated - Cally :)
Comment from country ranch writer
children are the best gift God has given us on this earth, rich or poor it is our job to take on the responsibility to make sure they are taking care of through out their life.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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children are the best gift God has given us on this earth, rich or poor it is our job to take on the responsibility to make sure they are taking care of through out their life.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Yes, children are an incredible gift, as is the life which brings them to us. Thank you for your thoughtful review - Cally :)
