My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Satin and Lace."All of my poems of release.
9 total reviews
Comment from teafor2
Jaq Cee--Where was I when this STUFF was on the active
list? It's probably best that I didn't review it then
and actually shouldn't read it now: at my age, this sort
of reading might give an Ejection or something, I don't
have many friends any way, and certainly don't want to
injure my self. Maybe if I read a little at a time, it'll
be alright? The title and description was a warning; the
garter in the illustration was another sign.....neon....
stop, leave now...don't listen to the Siren, she's up to
no good...Her words are enchanting, they rhyme and are smooth like silk, I mean satin, which is even worst. Too
late I found myself flowing down the page, drawn along
like some puppy dog...following that age old scent....
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Jaq Cee--Where was I when this STUFF was on the active
list? It's probably best that I didn't review it then
and actually shouldn't read it now: at my age, this sort
of reading might give an Ejection or something, I don't
have many friends any way, and certainly don't want to
injure my self. Maybe if I read a little at a time, it'll
be alright? The title and description was a warning; the
garter in the illustration was another sign.....neon....
stop, leave now...don't listen to the Siren, she's up to
no good...Her words are enchanting, they rhyme and are smooth like silk, I mean satin, which is even worst. Too
late I found myself flowing down the page, drawn along
like some puppy dog...following that age old scent....
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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This one made me laugh you, I wouldn't want to be to blame for you ejecting and possibly hurting yourself :). You lied by the way... you have lots of friends on here :) Glad you enjoyed it and watch you don't poke your eye out ;-) lol Jaq xx
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You are joking right? You can't really poke
out an eye rejerking, can you? I must be do-
ing something wrong...
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Hmmmmmmmmm I think it may depend on...
:-) xx
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Quit it, before I soil myself :))))
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Hahahahaha x
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It's not so funny, did you tell Lmao
about me... who is he and what is he
to you...
Comment from Alexmi1984
It might be my sleepy brain but I had this feeling that I read two things in one single post. I've read a poem (which was the post's main category) and I also read a really romantic and dare I say lusty story. The thing is that I will combine my review and say that it was a great postory and that it flew well. I will add that your images were easy on the eyes as well as on the reader's lips and that the few rhymes that this poem had were exquisitely constructed. All in all, this was a lovely poem that shows us that Valentine's Day is all year long.
Alex :)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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It might be my sleepy brain but I had this feeling that I read two things in one single post. I've read a poem (which was the post's main category) and I also read a really romantic and dare I say lusty story. The thing is that I will combine my review and say that it was a great postory and that it flew well. I will add that your images were easy on the eyes as well as on the reader's lips and that the few rhymes that this poem had were exquisitely constructed. All in all, this was a lovely poem that shows us that Valentine's Day is all year long.
Alex :)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much for your cracking and insightful review Alex. :) Jaq xx
Comment from GarthL
First up I had difficulty reading it clearly, I think lighten the purple background a touch or two and make the text a little larger. Other than that it's a very well written and rhymed piece about THE MOMENT Jaq! I'm sure it lead to a mutually beneficial end result. Well done, stay strong, Garth
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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First up I had difficulty reading it clearly, I think lighten the purple background a touch or two and make the text a little larger. Other than that it's a very well written and rhymed piece about THE MOMENT Jaq! I'm sure it lead to a mutually beneficial end result. Well done, stay strong, Garth
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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I'll look at the colour from home. :) Thanks for your kind words and support once again. :) Blessings Jaq xx
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200% better Jaq, well done!!!
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Jaq, well the ending sure is up-lifting:D
Well penned and smooth flow, a great job throughout it.
Thanks for sharing this one - I liked it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Hi Jaq, well the ending sure is up-lifting:D
Well penned and smooth flow, a great job throughout it.
Thanks for sharing this one - I liked it.
Maureen
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Lol thanks Maureen ;-) it did get to the point I guess xxx
Comment from Gungalo
Very very good girl. You have it now I think. To write of love and desire you must have experienced it. I love the ending to this one.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Very very good girl. You have it now I think. To write of love and desire you must have experienced it. I love the ending to this one.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much fot that lovely review Gungalo xxx
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Smile.
Comment from Indie Skreet
oh yes, yes, yes - a perfect wistful write by one who knows how. You have presented it superbly too - nothing to criticise and I would not change a thing, lots of love Indie xx
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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oh yes, yes, yes - a perfect wistful write by one who knows how. You have presented it superbly too - nothing to criticise and I would not change a thing, lots of love Indie xx
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thanks once again for your great review xxx
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reading this back, I just wanted to make clear when I said by one knows who, you do realise I meant YOU! :D XX
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Lol Indie it's all gpod :) xxx
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:D
Comment from Rondeno
The command of versification and rhyme on display here is impressive, but far more importantly, this is a delightful poem of seduction and lovemaking. It's a gem!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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The command of versification and rhyme on display here is impressive, but far more importantly, this is a delightful poem of seduction and lovemaking. It's a gem!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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So glad you liked it Meehal. That makes me happy :) Jaq xx
Comment from Jacq77
I thought this was very well written, and beautifully presented. The artwork you chose, and purple background was exquisite, a very apt setting for your descriptive words. This had very good rhyme and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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I thought this was very well written, and beautifully presented. The artwork you chose, and purple background was exquisite, a very apt setting for your descriptive words. This had very good rhyme and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Jacq. Your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend very well written full of feeling and of course very good rhyming throughout well done my friend you have done well regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Yes my friend very well written full of feeling and of course very good rhyming throughout well done my friend you have done well regards Jill
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thanks Jill, once again, for your continued support. :) Jaq xx