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Comment from Robin Gilmor
Quite an enjoyable verse. Good use of descriptive words encourage
good visual effects of the storm and the rough ocean waves as the
men battle and pray. Smiles. Robin :)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Quite an enjoyable verse. Good use of descriptive words encourage
good visual effects of the storm and the rough ocean waves as the
men battle and pray. Smiles. Robin :)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thank you Robin. A bit of Nautical Drama.
Comment from sunnilicious
That poem reminds me of the boats on Old Spice. Well thought out. Nicely written with vivid imagery. Good repeat line that works out well. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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That poem reminds me of the boats on Old Spice. Well thought out. Nicely written with vivid imagery. Good repeat line that works out well. Excellent work.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. I love Old Spuce.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You are so right there, Treischel, everyone will call on God, first when in trouble. I have never ever heard anyone call on satan. Excellent poem and a pleasure to read. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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You are so right there, Treischel, everyone will call on God, first when in trouble. I have never ever heard anyone call on satan. Excellent poem and a pleasure to read. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thank you Sandra. Your commentary is perceptive. We are in concert of opinion.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Great spiritual prose there MR T Enjoyed your stormy seas felt the wind blowing those stinging drops of rain upon face face even though the sun is shining brightly here
TK
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Great spiritual prose there MR T Enjoyed your stormy seas felt the wind blowing those stinging drops of rain upon face face even though the sun is shining brightly here
TK
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thank you Sir T. I see you've made the connections. Sun and Rain.
Comment from L. Sherman
A very well-rhymed, short poem in a great style. The phrase 'wild rolling waves' really sticks and solidifies this poem. It's short but nicely paced and paints a clear picture. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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A very well-rhymed, short poem in a great style. The phrase 'wild rolling waves' really sticks and solidifies this poem. It's short but nicely paced and paints a clear picture. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thank you L. Sherman. Glad you could enjoy it.
Comment from Gungalo
Yes they do too. Your triolet is perfect and really shows a good usage of your repeating lines. Great write Treischel and again an easy one.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Yes they do too. Your triolet is perfect and really shows a good usage of your repeating lines. Great write Treischel and again an easy one.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. I just go with the flow.
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Smile.
