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Comment from Robin Gilmor
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Lovely thought and so true. Where would we be without water! A
reality that not enough take seriously. We should see a lot of
rain in April, as the old saying goes, to bring forth those May flowers.
Smiles. Where is your picture. Waiting for rain? Robin :)

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
    Thanks Robin. It's been forecast.
Comment from trimple
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A wonderful tribute to the fluid that sustains life on this rotating soup we all call home.
A super poem
Kind regards
Trimple :)

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    Thanks Trimple. Glad you could enjoy.
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
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Aloha Treischel,
Thank you for the poem about rain and our thirsty soil, so many are suffering with not enough moisture. Thank you for sharing. Others are going to having floods because of all the snow. We have only had less than 2" since the first of the year. I posted a poem about rain, did you see it.
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Aloha, Ginger
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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    You have made me smile with pride. Thank you Ginger.
Comment from Gungalo
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Such a beautiful triolet Treischel. Wonderful repeating lines. I guess everyone is thinking of rain these days, eh?
I really liked this:

What wonderful blessings on Earth
Abundant celestial worth
Blue water makes planets royal

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    Thank you Gungalo. Yes, thinking Spring.
reply by Gungalo on 22-Mar-2013
    Smiling at you Treischel.
Comment from whispersofthesoul
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Hiya,
This was a beautiful piece of writing to read "refreshing". Although st this particular moment in time I have to disagree with you with the amount of rain that has fell today
The line you have repeated is perfect and it works brilliantly it also makes you think for a moment

Good job
Whispers xx

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    Thank you Whispersoftthesoul.