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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Warm Rain"My thoughts about t
7 total reviews
Comment from Robin Gilmor
You are wishing so hard for rain, but you will probably get
more snow before spring. Enjoyable write. Miss
your pictures.
Robin :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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You are wishing so hard for rain, but you will probably get
more snow before spring. Enjoyable write. Miss
your pictures.
Robin :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thanks Robin.
I'm traveling and the site won't let me upload pictures from my IPad.
Comment from yonashalom
This is a lovely triolet. You did a good job with choosing your lines to make this flow. I like the raindrops and the cleansing. :) ~Yona
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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This is a lovely triolet. You did a good job with choosing your lines to make this flow. I like the raindrops and the cleansing. :) ~Yona
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thanks Yona. Water purification.
Comment from sunnilicious
That triolet poem came out lovely. They're not so simple to write. Good repeat lines. It came out clean and refreshing. Well done. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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That triolet poem came out lovely. They're not so simple to write. Good repeat lines. It came out clean and refreshing. Well done. Excellent work.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank yo sunnilicious ious. Your creativity has me smiling again.
Comment from Gungalo
A wonderful triolet Treischel and right in line. The repeating lines and skillfully placed. Rain can be such a cleaning thing when it falls on you.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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A wonderful triolet Treischel and right in line. The repeating lines and skillfully placed. Rain can be such a cleaning thing when it falls on you.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you Gungalo for your great review.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I like this Mr T feels like I am out in a meadow tasting those fallen rain drops on my tongue In fact it is so realistic I shall award you a special rating It's a token of appreciation for the great words you write
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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I like this Mr T feels like I am out in a meadow tasting those fallen rain drops on my tongue In fact it is so realistic I shall award you a special rating It's a token of appreciation for the great words you write
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you Sir T. I humbly accept.
Comment from donaldww
This is a good triolet about the refreshing qualities that warm rain when people allow it to fall on their heads. It may be that people rush to put up their umbrellas too quickly, thereby missing the cleansing qualities that it imbues.
Here's hoping there'll be some 'warm' rain any day now. LOL
Cheers.
DW
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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This is a good triolet about the refreshing qualities that warm rain when people allow it to fall on their heads. It may be that people rush to put up their umbrellas too quickly, thereby missing the cleansing qualities that it imbues.
Here's hoping there'll be some 'warm' rain any day now. LOL
Cheers.
DW
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you Donald. Let's hope so.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
So often poets use rain as a symbol of sadness and disillusionment. Your poem effectively conveys the theme that rain is often a positive element.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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So often poets use rain as a symbol of sadness and disillusionment. Your poem effectively conveys the theme that rain is often a positive element.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you Janice. Yes, it can be joyful rain.
