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Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "When Im Alone "My thoughts about t
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Comment from Indie Skreet
another beautiful and illustrative write, which shows how talented you are. I will enjoy reading more and that makes reviewing so much easier :) best wishes Indie
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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another beautiful and illustrative write, which shows how talented you are. I will enjoy reading more and that makes reviewing so much easier :) best wishes Indie
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thank you Indie.
Comment from jasmine 53
wow the title grabs my attention ..when im alone...loneliness invades each an every soul, everyone ..and all of us feel depressed and haunted especially in the thick darkness of night when fear mingled with creeping silence engulf u n blood curdling thoughts grip u . the poet in a very touching way describes the inner fear .and then came the end in the divine shelter of God almighty all the fears evaporates leaving no sign behind.an impressive poem with impressive idea
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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wow the title grabs my attention ..when im alone...loneliness invades each an every soul, everyone ..and all of us feel depressed and haunted especially in the thick darkness of night when fear mingled with creeping silence engulf u n blood curdling thoughts grip u . the poet in a very touching way describes the inner fear .and then came the end in the divine shelter of God almighty all the fears evaporates leaving no sign behind.an impressive poem with impressive idea
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you jasmine. You very eloquently surmised the essence of it. I appreciate your comments and review.
Comment from Michael Wayne
I really liked this use of form paired with this theme. Solid visuals and a constant pace served well to deliver this message, one I am quite familiar with. Thank you for sharing this piece.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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I really liked this use of form paired with this theme. Solid visuals and a constant pace served well to deliver this message, one I am quite familiar with. Thank you for sharing this piece.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you Michael. I appreciate you stopping by to review and comment.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
This poem is excellent. It has excellent rhyme and rhythm. It flows and has good imagery. It invokes the mood of fear and darkness. Then at the end of the poem vanquish those feelings.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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This poem is excellent. It has excellent rhyme and rhythm. It flows and has good imagery. It invokes the mood of fear and darkness. Then at the end of the poem vanquish those feelings.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you Preston. I appreciate you stopping by to review and comment.
Comment from Sararb
I really enjoyed reading this poem. You did a great job of describing someone alone having a sleepless night, and hearing creaks and groans throughout the house. Very nice flow. and rhyming was in sync. Sararb :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. You did a great job of describing someone alone having a sleepless night, and hearing creaks and groans throughout the house. Very nice flow. and rhyming was in sync. Sararb :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Sararb for your wonderful review. I appreciate your comments. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from yonashalom
Very nice form!! Woohoo. :) Great job with this octogram. I love the theme too. It reminds me of myself. I hate listening for noises. And a prayer does help keep the peace of heart. :) You should have a dog to jump in the bed. :) ~Yona
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Very nice form!! Woohoo. :) Great job with this octogram. I love the theme too. It reminds me of myself. I hate listening for noises. And a prayer does help keep the peace of heart. :) You should have a dog to jump in the bed. :) ~Yona
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Thanks Yona. Great idea!
Comment from GracieAnn
This a well done poem with balance and rhyme and a hopeful conclusion. Rhyming words used are effective with a good depiction of something we all have felt at one time or another.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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This a well done poem with balance and rhyme and a hopeful conclusion. Rhyming words used are effective with a good depiction of something we all have felt at one time or another.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Thank you GracieAnn
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer is very descriptive is the message. The writer selects words that forces the reader to feel the passion within this piece. This piece has good rhyming and the whole nine.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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The writer is very descriptive is the message. The writer selects words that forces the reader to feel the passion within this piece. This piece has good rhyming and the whole nine.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Righteous.
Comment from Zinnia48
Treischel--I am not ordinarily a fan of spiritual poetry, but really enjoyed this one. I think that your vulnerability and honesty is what makes it work. Your rhythm and rhyme support it beautifully. Thanks! Caroline
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Treischel--I am not ordinarily a fan of spiritual poetry, but really enjoyed this one. I think that your vulnerability and honesty is what makes it work. Your rhythm and rhyme support it beautifully. Thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Thank you Caroline.
Comment from Kiki12
Very nice revealing the fears and insecurities of the unknown which we are unable to overcome on our own sometimes, but by sharing those fears in prayer, you free yourself form the worry and angst and now are left alone in a freeing way.
Kiki
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Very nice revealing the fears and insecurities of the unknown which we are unable to overcome on our own sometimes, but by sharing those fears in prayer, you free yourself form the worry and angst and now are left alone in a freeing way.
Kiki
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Kiki
