My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "You thrill me."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from teafor2
Jaq Cee--An what is this that I've stumbled upon? Don't
tell me, let me guess, please? A tryst with a hunk? A
roll in the hay? a visit from an incubus? Plain old con-gress? Wrong again! Well whatever, it is, it is done in
an adult manner, which causes the pulse to increase and
some drops of drool to escape... :)))) teafor2
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Jaq Cee--An what is this that I've stumbled upon? Don't
tell me, let me guess, please? A tryst with a hunk? A
roll in the hay? a visit from an incubus? Plain old con-gress? Wrong again! Well whatever, it is, it is done in
an adult manner, which causes the pulse to increase and
some drops of drool to escape... :)))) teafor2
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013
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Hahaha what a brilliant review t42, always a pleasure ;-) Jaq xx
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Don't blame me, I only had questions and no answers... teafor2
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Ahhh maybe the answers will appear soon :) Jaq x
Comment from Alexmi1984
I guess that your poem shows that romanticism is a yearly way of thought. I also think that it had the same level of pleasure that a glass of wine and a hint of chocolate could give to one's soul. I'm usually not a fan of the romance genre but I'd say that your poetic story (if I may consider it as such.) was a moment of pure pleasure, Jaq!
Alex :)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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I guess that your poem shows that romanticism is a yearly way of thought. I also think that it had the same level of pleasure that a glass of wine and a hint of chocolate could give to one's soul. I'm usually not a fan of the romance genre but I'd say that your poetic story (if I may consider it as such.) was a moment of pure pleasure, Jaq!
Alex :)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Alex, I appreciate your time and review. I'm just trying out other genre's :) Jaq xxx
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
A most sensual poem. The great descriptions set a mood that flows to the end of this well written work. The artwork gives a hint of what is to come. Excellent poem. I especially liked this stanza:
you set free
my burning desire
hidden for so long...
now it flows
as nectar does from
bountilful (bountiful) flowers
Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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A most sensual poem. The great descriptions set a mood that flows to the end of this well written work. The artwork gives a hint of what is to come. Excellent poem. I especially liked this stanza:
you set free
my burning desire
hidden for so long...
now it flows
as nectar does from
bountilful (bountiful) flowers
Enjoyed!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Midnight your review is much appreciated :) Jaq x
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You are welcome. MN :)
Comment from Galactia
beautiful written love poem.
Love the lines...
dark hair
swept suavely
back,
I stared
into those eyes
like pools of
stardust,
shivering--
I knelt in
anticipation
teasing me
with your
solid self
I smile--
You are mine,
I am yours--
stunning, well written free verse.
great job
Regards
tia
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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beautiful written love poem.
Love the lines...
dark hair
swept suavely
back,
I stared
into those eyes
like pools of
stardust,
shivering--
I knelt in
anticipation
teasing me
with your
solid self
I smile--
You are mine,
I am yours--
stunning, well written free verse.
great job
Regards
tia
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Tia xx
Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is really a tantalizing love poem, done with steaming loving words. Your word-stringing created a kind of visual impression particularly in the last stanza.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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This is really a tantalizing love poem, done with steaming loving words. Your word-stringing created a kind of visual impression particularly in the last stanza.
ola thomas
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for a lovely review Ola. Much appreciated :) Jaq xx
Comment from JM daSilva
Yeah, that's beautiful. I needed that this morning. Lots of work ahead of me and then I start my day with this poem. kudos to you for helping me brighten my day.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Yeah, that's beautiful. I needed that this morning. Lots of work ahead of me and then I start my day with this poem. kudos to you for helping me brighten my day.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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LOL, thank you so much for your lovely review. :) Jaq x
p.s glad to be of assistance
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Welcome. It was a good way to start my day.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very wel lwritten, jaq cee, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the thrills that love can bring. i enjoyed reading this one...
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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this is very wel lwritten, jaq cee, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the thrills that love can bring. i enjoyed reading this one...
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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SWJ glad you enjoyed it, just a wee break from my norm. Thanks for reviewing :) Jaq xx
Comment from MizKat
Jaq Cee - Your poem is very nice. It's written well and tells a nice poetic story. I like the picture you chose and the coloring you put as a background. Everything goes together perfectly. Kat
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Jaq Cee - Your poem is very nice. It's written well and tells a nice poetic story. I like the picture you chose and the coloring you put as a background. Everything goes together perfectly. Kat
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Hi Kat, thanks for your very kind review. :) Jaq xx
Comment from GWinterwin
Very sexy sensuous poem telling about the gratification of pure love and ecstasy. Creative words about giving yourself to your lover and taking him as your prize of life. Good words tell a very sexy and exciting story of love.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Very sexy sensuous poem telling about the gratification of pure love and ecstasy. Creative words about giving yourself to your lover and taking him as your prize of life. Good words tell a very sexy and exciting story of love.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Hey GW thanks for great review, much appreciated. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This poetry is "STEAMING HOT". I like the way that
the words are arranged on the page. After reading
this poetry I needed a cigarette and a cold shower.
Thank You for the fantasy and the thrills.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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This poetry is "STEAMING HOT". I like the way that
the words are arranged on the page. After reading
this poetry I needed a cigarette and a cold shower.
Thank You for the fantasy and the thrills.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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B_O hope the cold shower worked ;-) and thanks for your brilliant and fun review. :) Jaq xx