Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

I thought there was a reason for all those frowning people to be walking on their hands. Nice poem with extremes. I don't know how to answer your last question. However, I think balance can be found. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013

Why thank you sunnilicious, Erin go Braugh.

Comment from Johnny-artist

Excellent

Treischel +I think that "Up and Down" was a reality check~ figuring in that we as humans aren't always happy... but being content with the sharing can work... questioning the usual.

"Can you really be up,when your down?"
"Maybe the answer's up in the sky."

Thank you for sharing. uncleJohn

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013

Thanks for the visit and comments Uncle John.

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

This is a great poem. It gives the readers much food for thought.
How can we be up when everything is down.
Where do we find the inspiration and motivation to continue? Is this the end of the road? We cannot accurately gauge our own reactions to things anymore.
One minute we are sad, the next a happy news - we won first prize in the FanStory contest and then our pet cat died.
The feelings and the moods change depending on the events that await us unknowingly.
Good write but our of sixers as usual. A virtual seven! After reading the poem, how do the readers feel? Are they up or down? We never know.
Great write and makes the readers ponder, and wonder and let their minds wander, smiles!
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013

Thanks Ritchie. It was fun to write.

reply by 9999pool on 16-Mar-2013

Hi Tom,

This is a good write. Fun to read and need to think about the issues too.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

Clever. "can you really be up, when you're down?" Why not. I could be down often; however, I choose not to live my life that way. I'm always happy and feel that the sad will abate and not equate unhappiness. well written and enjoyable. Smiles always, with hugs, Robin :)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013

Thank you Robin. When I woke up this morning I was lying down. Smile!

reply by Robin Gilmor on 15-Mar-2013

Funny guy. :)

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

What a puzzle life is Mr. T and you have captured it well with your puzzling prose of the wonderment of wondering You even made the wizardly wizard of worldly words of wiz-dumb smile
TK

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013

Thank you Sir T. Life can be a bit Tarnished at times.

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

Yes, if you can be redundant simultaneously at the same time.
This morning I woke up lying down, I might have screwed up
last night.
Nice job on this puzzle poem in rhymed quatrains.
Rich.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013

Thank you Rich. Weird night?

reply by Rmocruz on 15-Mar-2013

I was attempting to be puzzling.
You're welcome Treiscel.

Comment from neharika.m

Excellent

well well, the poem is an interesting read and a poser, which will appear differently to different readers according to their own state of mind. The puzzle rhymes well also and is quite recitable. I like id very much. Thanx for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013

Thank you neharika.

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

I love the picture. God is so awesome. I don't think I have ever read this style of poem before but it is interesting. great job. God loves you and i do too.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013

Thank you Evelyn. I happily blessed.