Commentary and Philosophy
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Comment from emjaihammond
You have presented a nice poem about a legendary movie, we all know and love. Your words flow nicely and they capture the imagination in the very beginning. I just took two of my granddaughters to see the new Oz movie. We all loved it. Generationless! Not a word I know, but you know what I mean. Job well done!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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You have presented a nice poem about a legendary movie, we all know and love. Your words flow nicely and they capture the imagination in the very beginning. I just took two of my granddaughters to see the new Oz movie. We all loved it. Generationless! Not a word I know, but you know what I mean. Job well done!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you emjaihammond. Appreciate the comments. Great movie!
Comment from Kevin C
This is superb poem. I like the form you chose which adds to the read perfectly. I thought you capture the Wizard of Oz perfectly. Your words are excellent and I love how you put a message of following your dreams in the end. Your author notes added to your presentation. This was a great write and I wish I had a six for you.
Kevin
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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This is superb poem. I like the form you chose which adds to the read perfectly. I thought you capture the Wizard of Oz perfectly. Your words are excellent and I love how you put a message of following your dreams in the end. Your author notes added to your presentation. This was a great write and I wish I had a six for you.
Kevin
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Thank you Kevin. I appreciate your comments
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, treischel, you did a great job writing this trijan refrain about the movie that has spanned generations. i enjoyed reading this one...
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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this is very well written, treischel, you did a great job writing this trijan refrain about the movie that has spanned generations. i enjoyed reading this one...
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Thank you sweetwoodjax. I enjoyed writing it. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Indie Skreet
well what a wonderful wizard you are :) This is a fun read with a lovely last line, 'chase those dreams and go with the flow' - I think I will just do that myself :) best Indie
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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well what a wonderful wizard you are :) This is a fun read with a lovely last line, 'chase those dreams and go with the flow' - I think I will just do that myself :) best Indie
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Thanks Indie. Follow the yellow brick road.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Most poetry that I have read is personal interest. This is a good example. This poem was good. You made the words flow smoothly so that the idea behind the poem was understood. I found no errors. Nice job, in my opinion.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Most poetry that I have read is personal interest. This is a good example. This poem was good. You made the words flow smoothly so that the idea behind the poem was understood. I found no errors. Nice job, in my opinion.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Thank you Eigle for coming by with a nice review and comments.
Comment from djsaxon
I am not going to challenge the form. First glance tells mme that you got it right:D. Commentary certainly, with just a hint of philosophy. I enjoyed it. Cheers- DJ
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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I am not going to challenge the form. First glance tells mme that you got it right:D. Commentary certainly, with just a hint of philosophy. I enjoyed it. Cheers- DJ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Thank you DJ. Glad you read and enjoyed.
Comment from wrytergurl
Very nice! I often become inspired to write from snippets found in movie lines as well! Not familiar with a Trijan Refrain, but based on what you have described, it appears to be spot on.
Although "Oz" scared my daughter to death, and to this day she cannot watch it, I have always counted it among my favorites;your poem is inspiring!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Very nice! I often become inspired to write from snippets found in movie lines as well! Not familiar with a Trijan Refrain, but based on what you have described, it appears to be spot on.
Although "Oz" scared my daughter to death, and to this day she cannot watch it, I have always counted it among my favorites;your poem is inspiring!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Thank you wrytergurl. Too bad your daughter got frightened. It's definitely a classic.
Comment from 9999pool
"The Great and Powerful Oz movie" had already opened here in Malaysia. The movie is not bad but I prefer "Beans, Jack the Giant Slayer" which had a more children story line with good action thrown in.
The poem did tell the Oz story quite well and in the Oz movie, a variant, of the original movie - there was a yellow road too, a flying monkey which you don't have here nor the hot air balloon.
The Trijan refrain is interesting and great job!
Cheerio and have a great Sunday and week, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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"The Great and Powerful Oz movie" had already opened here in Malaysia. The movie is not bad but I prefer "Beans, Jack the Giant Slayer" which had a more children story line with good action thrown in.
The poem did tell the Oz story quite well and in the Oz movie, a variant, of the original movie - there was a yellow road too, a flying monkey which you don't have here nor the hot air balloon.
The Trijan refrain is interesting and great job!
Cheerio and have a great Sunday and week, Ritchie.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thanks Ritchie. May be some future OZ poem in the future. I do plan to see the Beanstalk movie too. Enjoy the day. Tom
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Welcome Tom. The kids will prefer Beanstalk movie more, trust me. I am a great fan of kids/adult movie.
Have a great Sunday and week.
Ritchie.
Comment from sunnilicious
Hollywood remade Oz. Glad you remember the original version. I do too. It's a great movie. But you'll see the new version and forget the classic.... Good thing you wrote this poem.
Wonderful poem. Well thought out. Nicely written in a narrative format. Excellent work.
Have fun at the movies!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Hollywood remade Oz. Glad you remember the original version. I do too. It's a great movie. But you'll see the new version and forget the classic.... Good thing you wrote this poem.
Wonderful poem. Well thought out. Nicely written in a narrative format. Excellent work.
Have fun at the movies!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thanks sunnilicious . You are so creative! I am smiling!
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Treischel,
Dorthy's dream and the Wizard of Oz is an interesting poem with excellent imagery. The words paint vivid mental images for the mind's eye to see. It is an interesting read.
Curtis
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Treischel,
Dorthy's dream and the Wizard of Oz is an interesting poem with excellent imagery. The words paint vivid mental images for the mind's eye to see. It is an interesting read.
Curtis
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thank you Curtis
