Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Well done mate! I really enjoy this irish limerick style of poetry. I love the way it sings and flows. Good job and peace to you. Cheers Fez.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013

Thank you Fez. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

This was indeed a fun read. i do love the Irish accent and their way of saying things. I would love to visit Ireland some day. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013

Thank you Evelyn. I would like to someday too!

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

"Tis a TALL tale I'm reading for sure at the hands of Treischel's pen. Such a delight, said Paddy that night, that night he went for his swim! Terrific
my dear friend. Robin :)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013

Thank you Robin. I have to admit that your airport fairies inspired me to write this. I spent some time researching Irish folk tales, but finally gave up and made this one up.

Comment from Joannforsberg

Excellent

LOL. Good ST. Patty's day poem. I don't even know what day it is on yet? That is a sorry state of affairs to be that behind in a normal society event. The ending of course is wonderful.

JO

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013

Thanks Jo. Relax and smell the roses.

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

HEHE MR T YOU HIT THE FUNNY FIN ON THIS ONE THATS FOR SURE GREAT LINES HAVE TO MAKE SURE HAWAIIAN MERMAIDS READS THIS ONE
TK

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013

Thanks Sir T. Yes, she should get a kick out of it.

Comment from janalma

Excellent

Cute, and that wily Paddy is the winner. Ha. I enjoyed reading this little tale of overcoming the odds to have sex in the sea with the beautiful mermaids. Don't know much about poetry but think this sounded good.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013

Thank you so much janalma.

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

a witty poem and love the reference to Peter O'toole. You wound it up well in the last lines and the rhythm is perfect. best Indie

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013

Thank you Indie.

Comment from Heidixoxo

Excellent

What a great piece of poetry telling such a cute story for St. Patrick's Day!! It was fun to read and I really liked it. You have done a nice job with this and I wish all the luck in your future postings....xoxo

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013

Thanks Heidixoxo. I appreciate your review and good wishes.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

A great write in quatrains for St. Paddie's Day I'd say. LOL it didn't take too much for the following to happen:

Say what you may of Paddy O'Dea
After he got wind in his sails.
But it may explain why they look that way,
Since all of his children have scales.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013

Thank Gungalo. That's a story for another day!