haiku (leaves in breeze)
autumn haiku19 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
Hi Debbie,
Your words paint a lovely image(no picture is necessary)
What a lovely way to think about leaves--flags-- golden flags.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Hi Debbie,
Your words paint a lovely image(no picture is necessary)
What a lovely way to think about leaves--flags-- golden flags.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Thank you. Since I don't get out much, I am using pictures of the outdoors to inspire me~Debbie
Comment from FLutterodt
leaves in breeze
wave from maple branches
golden flags
A very interesting haiku that talks about one of my favorite subjects- plants and trees. I love the simplicity of the poem.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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leaves in breeze
wave from maple branches
golden flags
A very interesting haiku that talks about one of my favorite subjects- plants and trees. I love the simplicity of the poem.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from JW
In reading this haiku, I definitely get the impression that someone in still thinking about last Fall and the changing of the leaves.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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In reading this haiku, I definitely get the impression that someone in still thinking about last Fall and the changing of the leaves.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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I am taking the Japanese poetry course, and since I can't get outside, I am looking at nature magazines for inspiration. This was a fall issue. Thank you so much for your kind review. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from mermaids
Golden flags is an excellent line that shows what the leaves become. Your poem captures a feel for nature the presence of leaves.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Golden flags is an excellent line that shows what the leaves become. Your poem captures a feel for nature the presence of leaves.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece has autumn written all over it. The writer does a good job of describing the scene and making the reader feel like a part of this piece. Short, sweet and to the point.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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This piece has autumn written all over it. The writer does a good job of describing the scene and making the reader feel like a part of this piece. Short, sweet and to the point.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend well written and beautiful colour imagery I enjoyed this also the presentation is very good well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Yes my friend well written and beautiful colour imagery I enjoyed this also the presentation is very good well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you for you thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from JM daSilva
Leaves and flags. Interesting. Canada has one: the maple leaf. Are there any more countries with leaves on their flags? Great poem that made me curious about that.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Leaves and flags. Interesting. Canada has one: the maple leaf. Are there any more countries with leaves on their flags? Great poem that made me curious about that.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you for you thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Seventeen syllables and you actually painted a very pretty picture in your readers mind. You are a very talented young lady. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Seventeen syllables and you actually painted a very pretty picture in your readers mind. You are a very talented young lady. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you for you thoughtful review. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Joannforsberg
Golden flags is a great visual of fall's stunning colors blowing in a breeze. A very pretty written poem. Nice to see a little fall color as we have reached the drab days of the year.
JO
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Golden flags is a great visual of fall's stunning colors blowing in a breeze. A very pretty written poem. Nice to see a little fall color as we have reached the drab days of the year.
JO
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thank you for you thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from Bellringer
Debbie, very nice job with this haiku. The satori provides one with something to ponder--patriotism for one. Excellent presentation, too. Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Debbie, very nice job with this haiku. The satori provides one with something to ponder--patriotism for one. Excellent presentation, too. Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much, Hector. You helped me a lot with these a couple of years ago~Debbie