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Comment from Robin Gilmor
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A very scary thought. Well presented, smooth flowing and thought
provoking. An enjoyable piece. The picture is unique. thank you
for sharing with us. Robin :)

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
    Thank you Robin. Just a sunset.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That is an amazing poem and amazing picture, Treischel. Your words are quite thought provoking, mind boggling, in fact. Could it happen? Lovely sunset! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
    Thank you Sandra. You never know. That meteor over Russia was very scary.
Comment from Nottoway
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A well stated poem. No matter what the precautions, the danger is real that a peacetime, war driven, celestial nuclear event or damage due to a naureal disaster a nuclear event will be devastating to life as we know it.


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
    Thank you very much Nottoway. I am very pleased that you connected with my piece and the stellar rating.
Comment from hifein
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Really nice Treischel -- I like the way you get your point across. one day we may shut out the lights and be the glowers. no, that's impossible, duh. you are a fine poet, interesting way that you rhymed here. nice presentation. my best, hi

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
    Thanks much Hi. Glad you like it.
Comment from mshirachot
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WOW! You really had me going with this at first...I almost left the Fanstory page to head over to google to see if there was some news I missed! Some sunset! That's not even photoshopped?

A few years back we had a pinkish-red lightning phenomenon here in southern Ohio. No rain at all. Just eery looking lightning on a hot summer night. Although I did not catch it on camera, it had me considering the same things as you have written about in this poem.

Creative writing, brother!
Blessings!
Marsha


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
    Thank you Marsha. Nope, right out of the camera lens. I even got several shots of it.
Comment from sunnilicious
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Is this about Russia? I say the hole in the ozone layer let the asteroid in to the atmosphere. People were burnt up from the rain. 3000bldgs

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
    Thanks sunnilicious. That was incredible!