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Comment from mizzkris20
Your poem has a strong, positive message. It is bold and makes me want to go read my Bible now, lol. Great poem with a significant meaning. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Your poem has a strong, positive message. It is bold and makes me want to go read my Bible now, lol. Great poem with a significant meaning. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much mizzkris,
I am so pleased that you wanted to reach for your bible. : )
Comment from rabail hina
You have written very beautiful lines and delivered a lovely message. Your start and ending, both are good. I liked your poem very much, specially the lines;
Your dreams will be written
In golden Ink from a sparkling pen
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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You have written very beautiful lines and delivered a lovely message. Your start and ending, both are good. I liked your poem very much, specially the lines;
Your dreams will be written
In golden Ink from a sparkling pen
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you rabail hina
Comment from Righteous Riter
The message is clear and understandable. The passion of the writer is felt as the words bring the photo to life. his piece grabs my attention from the beginning and holds it to the end. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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The message is clear and understandable. The passion of the writer is felt as the words bring the photo to life. his piece grabs my attention from the beginning and holds it to the end. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you Righteous Riter. By the way , I am a she : )
Comment from Marquita_The Scribe
Thank you for reminding me of god's purpose for the lives of people on this site. My tongue is the pen of a ready writer.(psalms 45:1)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you for reminding me of god's purpose for the lives of people on this site. My tongue is the pen of a ready writer.(psalms 45:1)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you Marquita_The Scribe
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You are very welcome stay encouraged and keep writing.
Comment from tedanytime
These lines are profound. The words are full of meaning that could have differing interpretations.
There are words with caps that in a sense I understand to be alluding to The Book that was inspired. And when one who reads is changed, there is a life added with eternal pen in ink we never can understand.
I may return to read other verses you have written.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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These lines are profound. The words are full of meaning that could have differing interpretations.
There are words with caps that in a sense I understand to be alluding to The Book that was inspired. And when one who reads is changed, there is a life added with eternal pen in ink we never can understand.
I may return to read other verses you have written.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you tedanytime
Comment from SueZen
As yet only 4 stars, because rather confused:
1/ are pages already written (by inspired person/lover)
& you are reading ? or
2/ are you inspired & writing, signing with golden pen, etc. ?
Please let me know & we can 'work on it together...
Picture is lovely !
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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As yet only 4 stars, because rather confused:
1/ are pages already written (by inspired person/lover)
& you are reading ? or
2/ are you inspired & writing, signing with golden pen, etc. ?
Please let me know & we can 'work on it together...
Picture is lovely !
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you
Comment from ronnie k
There is no room for an outstanding line with a poem crowded with them. You started and finished with a strong bold loving message
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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There is no room for an outstanding line with a poem crowded with them. You started and finished with a strong bold loving message
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much ronnie, for your six stars
Comment from Shadow Pahn
Pretty good and short. I like the positive message inside, even though i find it too optimistic to be true. I think it will work well for people with an overall positive life, but people who are going through hardship might not connect as well. Still, it is well written, so 5 stars.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Pretty good and short. I like the positive message inside, even though i find it too optimistic to be true. I think it will work well for people with an overall positive life, but people who are going through hardship might not connect as well. Still, it is well written, so 5 stars.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you Shadow Pahn