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Comment from Karen B. Huck
Wish your words could be heard by the politicians who govern us all. Water is both a plentiful and rare resource depending where you are on this Blue Earth and it is becoming one of the great issues of the century. Worth writing about, especially in the form of an honest, thoughtful poem which flows as well as rivers do. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Wish your words could be heard by the politicians who govern us all. Water is both a plentiful and rare resource depending where you are on this Blue Earth and it is becoming one of the great issues of the century. Worth writing about, especially in the form of an honest, thoughtful poem which flows as well as rivers do. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Thank you Karen. I hope so too. Thank you for your thoughts.
Comment from 9999pool
Water, water everywhere. Wherever it flows and when it is plentiful, water will bring life on this planet. A refreshing coolness to quench our thirst and to survive. Without fresh clean water , all lives are doomed. The end of the world when water ceases to flow.
Good and excellent write about the precious life giving waters.
Cheers.
Ritchie.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Water, water everywhere. Wherever it flows and when it is plentiful, water will bring life on this planet. A refreshing coolness to quench our thirst and to survive. Without fresh clean water , all lives are doomed. The end of the world when water ceases to flow.
Good and excellent write about the precious life giving waters.
Cheers.
Ritchie.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Thank you Ritchie. Greetings from the Land of 10,000 Lakes to one who lives in the Ocean. Our common link is water and the stars.
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Yes, the oceans and the stars are so wide and immense. We cannot fathom how big the universe and galaxies are. With water we survive and without it, we will all perished.
Cheers, Ritchie. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an excellent piece. I love that this is an environmental piece. It touches my spirit in ways you may be able to imagine. I, too, believe we must take better care of this beautiful paradise we have been blessed with. While I sometimes write of far away worlds, I totally understand that this is the only planet we can survive on, and even if it isn't, it's home. Great work. Good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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This is an excellent piece. I love that this is an environmental piece. It touches my spirit in ways you may be able to imagine. I, too, believe we must take better care of this beautiful paradise we have been blessed with. While I sometimes write of far away worlds, I totally understand that this is the only planet we can survive on, and even if it isn't, it's home. Great work. Good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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Thank you, Mai Mai. There may be others out there, we just haven't found them yet. Maybe soem day.
Comment from mshirachot
How precious indeed is water...and even more precious...is that Living Water!
The poem and picture package is quite lovely and filled with a lot of thankfulness for the quenching qualities of refreshing water!
This line was spectacular with all it alliteration:
"Enjoy the wind washed water while we can,"
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Marsha
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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How precious indeed is water...and even more precious...is that Living Water!
The poem and picture package is quite lovely and filled with a lot of thankfulness for the quenching qualities of refreshing water!
This line was spectacular with all it alliteration:
"Enjoy the wind washed water while we can,"
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Marsha
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and comments Marsha.
Comment from country ranch writer
water has a calming effect as we sit on a bench and enjoy the sound. we must protect our water ways. without water we all perish and everything will be gone. as they say give a hoot don't poloute
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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water has a calming effect as we sit on a bench and enjoy the sound. we must protect our water ways. without water we all perish and everything will be gone. as they say give a hoot don't poloute
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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Thank you country. By Jove, I think you've got it!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this isvery well written, treishel, you did an excellent job writing this blank verse poem about the earth that gives us refreshing water we need to take care of. i enjoyed reading it. goodluck in the contest
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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this isvery well written, treishel, you did an excellent job writing this blank verse poem about the earth that gives us refreshing water we need to take care of. i enjoyed reading it. goodluck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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Thank you sweetwoodjax.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Blue life, how precious, poet's clarion call, message for living correlation, nice thought gravity plenty, words contoured specially in word manifestation, reflection of living bluish quantum, good flow, wavy visuals, I enjoyed.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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Blue life, how precious, poet's clarion call, message for living correlation, nice thought gravity plenty, words contoured specially in word manifestation, reflection of living bluish quantum, good flow, wavy visuals, I enjoyed.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013
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Thank you Alcreator.
Comment from Rayvynus
Wonderfully written! It flows so eloquently. Your ideas in each stanza fit well together. I especially like the end, it wraps it up so nicely, it makes me want spring to arrive early! Very well done!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013
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Wonderfully written! It flows so eloquently. Your ideas in each stanza fit well together. I especially like the end, it wraps it up so nicely, it makes me want spring to arrive early! Very well done!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013
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Thank you Rayvynus. I appreciate you taking a look and the wonderful review.
Comment from Gungalo
Treischel Blank Verse is just that a verse that's blank. It shouldn't be split up in quatrain format nor should it be in anything but 10-syllables.
Much better and definitely now blank verse. LOL.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Treischel Blank Verse is just that a verse that's blank. It shouldn't be split up in quatrain format nor should it be in anything but 10-syllables.
Much better and definitely now blank verse. LOL.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Hmmm,the contest rules said typically 10, but flexible. The example given in the prompt had a mix of quatrains, couplets and other formats.
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Hmmm,the contest rules said typically 10, but flexible. The example given in the prompt had a mix of quatrains, couplets and other formats.
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Your risk.
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Ok I changed it. Tips that better?
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Much guy. Smiling.
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Thanks for your input.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Joannforsberg
Hum. Maybe this is more what I write: blank verse for I do have some rhyming words when I write. enjoyed!
Hello, my computer is acting up and running slowly. So my reviews will be generic today. I normally do a slow read and review. Today, I am using my speed reading powers to review pages of written words here at Fanstory. I never consider the five stars I give as fluffy. For truly I am impressed with each writer I review. So, my five star is not a fluff piece given to you. But, I did speed read today and not given specific thoughts. Blessings, JO
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Hum. Maybe this is more what I write: blank verse for I do have some rhyming words when I write. enjoyed!
Hello, my computer is acting up and running slowly. So my reviews will be generic today. I normally do a slow read and review. Today, I am using my speed reading powers to review pages of written words here at Fanstory. I never consider the five stars I give as fluffy. For truly I am impressed with each writer I review. So, my five star is not a fluff piece given to you. But, I did speed read today and not given specific thoughts. Blessings, JO
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Thanks Jo. Appreciate the review, no mater how generic.
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Thanks Jo. Appreciate the review, no mater how generic.
