Thank God I'm Unemployed!
I don't have time for a job44 total reviews
Comment from Bobbi22
If this is unemployment, I sure am glad to have a job. A little bit of procrastination here with all those almost finished projects. Very entertaining poem. Try not to work so hard.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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If this is unemployment, I sure am glad to have a job. A little bit of procrastination here with all those almost finished projects. Very entertaining poem. Try not to work so hard.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you - I think I need to get a job just to have a break!
Steve
Comment from Bill Schott
I think this is the funniest poem I have read all year. It is so cool that it acknowledges all the stuff there is to do from day to day and then -- a job too. It's a hoot to read. Nice job with this.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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I think this is the funniest poem I have read all year. It is so cool that it acknowledges all the stuff there is to do from day to day and then -- a job too. It's a hoot to read. Nice job with this.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thanks, Bill, for the review and the six stars - I appreciate it.
Steve
Comment from l.raven
Hi Steve, This sounds like ma and pops place. I love all the different chores you get to do. Been there done half of them. Really a cute poem. Enjoyed reading this. Funny!! You work harder when you retire trying to catch up on all the things you couldn't do when you worked. Well done Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Hi Steve, This sounds like ma and pops place. I love all the different chores you get to do. Been there done half of them. Really a cute poem. Enjoyed reading this. Funny!! You work harder when you retire trying to catch up on all the things you couldn't do when you worked. Well done Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thanks, Lind - lots of reviewers have empathised with this.
Steve
Comment from nancyjam
Entertaining from beginning to end!
This is great fun - your sense
of humor shines through each line
of clever rhyme/
Love the fast pace and catchy rhythm.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Entertaining from beginning to end!
This is great fun - your sense
of humor shines through each line
of clever rhyme/
Love the fast pace and catchy rhythm.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thanks, Nancy - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from words
This is great fun.
I do admit, however, that after reading this, I do feel in the need of a little nap.
If you every post the full list ... I will need to sleep for a week. LOL
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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This is great fun.
I do admit, however, that after reading this, I do feel in the need of a little nap.
If you every post the full list ... I will need to sleep for a week. LOL
Hugs, d
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Nap?! Good God, there is no time for sleeping!
Steve
Comment from vfbryant
Fantastic! Combines humor, vivid specific images, realism, and terrific writing. Wish now I had written one about the days of raising my three little ones alone!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Fantastic! Combines humor, vivid specific images, realism, and terrific writing. Wish now I had written one about the days of raising my three little ones alone!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Ah, yes, that's a whole different level of busy...
Thanks for the kind words.
Steve
Comment from Cedar
I really enjoyed reading this one. I think you wrote this one especially for me. I'm retired and have lived on a farm for nearly 70 years. All the things you have mentioned, I have done or still do on a daily basis. Great piece of writing. Bill
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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I really enjoyed reading this one. I think you wrote this one especially for me. I'm retired and have lived on a farm for nearly 70 years. All the things you have mentioned, I have done or still do on a daily basis. Great piece of writing. Bill
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thanks, Bill - you're right, many people do accomplish these tasks all the time - I take my hat off to them and you.
Steve
Comment from nomi338
Whew! This poem is great. I fear that if I had to do all the things you mentioned, I would faint dead away. There are far too many "Honey dos." (Honey do this, honey do that.) You would probably not be nearly as busy.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Whew! This poem is great. I fear that if I had to do all the things you mentioned, I would faint dead away. There are far too many "Honey dos." (Honey do this, honey do that.) You would probably not be nearly as busy.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from AprilShower
I like this, kiwisteveh. I sounds a little like my list of things to so. The thing is I'm retired. My excuse is all this reading to promote my writings. I just can't get around to doing what needs done around here. LOL. Very well done.
You have quite a hard moniker to say.
April
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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I like this, kiwisteveh. I sounds a little like my list of things to so. The thing is I'm retired. My excuse is all this reading to promote my writings. I just can't get around to doing what needs done around here. LOL. Very well done.
You have quite a hard moniker to say.
April
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thanks, April.
Are you new here? If so, welcome to FanStory.
My name would habe been kiwisteve (on another site) but they already had one of those, so I tacked the H from my surname onto the end...
Steve
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Thank you, Steve. No. I'm not new here. I've been around for a while.
April :o)
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This poetry is very well written. It made me exhausted
just thinking about all of these chores. The rhymes
are nicely placed and it is easy to read. It uses non-
confusing language making it clearly understood. Thank
You for your creation.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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This poetry is very well written. It made me exhausted
just thinking about all of these chores. The rhymes
are nicely placed and it is easy to read. It uses non-
confusing language making it clearly understood. Thank
You for your creation.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind words. I should have put writing reviews and replies to reviews on the list!
Steve
