Destiny
Destiny cannot be changed2 total reviews
Comment from Galactia
Destiny will come
When I am ready for it
But now, let's enjoy
perfect little 5'7'5 poem and so true, let's sit back and smell the roses and enjoy life, before slave labour :)
Great job
Regards
tia
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Destiny will come
When I am ready for it
But now, let's enjoy
perfect little 5'7'5 poem and so true, let's sit back and smell the roses and enjoy life, before slave labour :)
Great job
Regards
tia
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Thanks dear. I'm so humbled by your review.
Comment from John Langfeld
Textbook perfect, but not with the usual mystery and sense of discovery with a Haiku. Why aren't you ready for destiny? Would destiny care? Destiny comes when you are ready? Arrogant. (not you just the notion)
Hedonism in a Haiku. I would prefer a more subtle expression of that. This sounds like the ol' hackneyed eat, drink and be merry tomorrow thing.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Textbook perfect, but not with the usual mystery and sense of discovery with a Haiku. Why aren't you ready for destiny? Would destiny care? Destiny comes when you are ready? Arrogant. (not you just the notion)
Hedonism in a Haiku. I would prefer a more subtle expression of that. This sounds like the ol' hackneyed eat, drink and be merry tomorrow thing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Thanks for your review John