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Stars Can't Shine Without Darkness

Stars are like glitter on the background of the dark sky

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Comment from Akira Mana
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I really like this Haiku, i think its very carefully thought through. I really hope to see more of your work in the future. ;) ~Akira

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2013

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
    Thanks Akira,
    I I will try and keep updating my work :D
Comment from nankins
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I like the depth in your title.Very positive. Simple words yet carry a great impact on the reader. It's amazing that you are only 14. Good luck for your future endeavors:-)

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2013

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
    Thank you for your support!
Comment from barkingdog
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I like the way you describe the stars. They do look like glitter.
You have a nice flow of 's' consonance in your second line. Your syllable count is perfect in this 5/7/5/.
Good luck in the contest and keep up the good work, cmaatouk.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2013

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
    Thank you for your feedback :D
Comment from garrymc5
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Awesome space, and light, and time. Start from the horizon, from things you know and don't know. See what happens. See what words you find.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2013

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
    Thank for the advice!