Amore`
The ultimate love15 total reviews
Comment from Warren Rodgers
The title of your poem reminds me of that old song by Dean Martin, not it's playing in my head over and over again! lol The quick pace and musical cadence to your well rhymed words create a light feeling and some nice visuals in my mind.
Well done,
All the best, Rodger
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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The title of your poem reminds me of that old song by Dean Martin, not it's playing in my head over and over again! lol The quick pace and musical cadence to your well rhymed words create a light feeling and some nice visuals in my mind.
Well done,
All the best, Rodger
Comment Written 23-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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Thank you, Warren, for your kind words. Gee, I had not thought of Dean Martin's Amore` in awhile. Good Music!
Comment from Bina1
Oh, this is soooooooo nice! What a fine poem, almost a melody when you read it! Thank you for sharing, nice presentation as well. Beautiful rhyme and pattern.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Oh, this is soooooooo nice! What a fine poem, almost a melody when you read it! Thank you for sharing, nice presentation as well. Beautiful rhyme and pattern.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank your for your very kind words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a poem that's fun to read. Its makeup of 2-2-3 syllable stanzas, along with the rhyme scheme make it interesting and memorable.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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This is a poem that's fun to read. Its makeup of 2-2-3 syllable stanzas, along with the rhyme scheme make it interesting and memorable.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your kind words, Bill. I always enjoy one's view of what I write. It always gives me food for thought.
Comment from MizKat
oldefoggie - I love you poem. It reads well and I enjoyed the short verses. It looks kind of like an Eleven77 style. I had to smile at your pen name, then saw your picture and thought. "What is she talking about? She doesn't look old." Now if it was a picture of me the name would fit. (; Kat
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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oldefoggie - I love you poem. It reads well and I enjoyed the short verses. It looks kind of like an Eleven77 style. I had to smile at your pen name, then saw your picture and thought. "What is she talking about? She doesn't look old." Now if it was a picture of me the name would fit. (; Kat
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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MizKat, thank you for stopping by; and especially for your kind words. Please do come again. [FYI--I am 72, have 18 living grandchildren and 19 great grands. There's a long story behind the useage of 'oldefoggie'.
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Well, oldefoggie, we're in the same age group except I'm 75, nearly 76 in a couple of months. You have more greats and grands than I do, but I am now the proud gramma of my first great-great-grandson. Your picture still doesn't tell your age though. Kat
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Well, oldefoggie, we're in the same age group except I'm 75, nearly 76 in a couple of months. You have more greats and grands than I do, but I am now the proud gramma of my first great-great-grandson. Your picture still doesn't tell your age though. Kat
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Congrats! Each grand is a cherished blessing.
Comment from pbroussard209
I really enjoyed the flow of this poem. It made it fun to read in almost a sing song voice. You did an awesome job and it was so romantic. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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I really enjoyed the flow of this poem. It made it fun to read in almost a sing song voice. You did an awesome job and it was so romantic. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review my work. Do come again soon. Your words are thing of music to a poet.
Comment from GWinterwin
Sure sounds like a perfect love and the angels do rejoice about true sinless love between two married people. God bless your love always. Good words and great rhyming makes this a beautiful poem that says it all.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Sure sounds like a perfect love and the angels do rejoice about true sinless love between two married people. God bless your love always. Good words and great rhyming makes this a beautiful poem that says it all.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for stopping by; and your very kind words.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
oldefoggie,
The poem is beautifully penned with excellent rhythm and rhyme. The imagery is outstanding and provides word pictures for the mind to see. Your choice of color scheme, format, and photo add allure to the presentation.
When read aloud, it has a nice cadence that adds to the pleasure of the read.
Curtis
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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oldefoggie,
The poem is beautifully penned with excellent rhythm and rhyme. The imagery is outstanding and provides word pictures for the mind to see. Your choice of color scheme, format, and photo add allure to the presentation.
When read aloud, it has a nice cadence that adds to the pleasure of the read.
Curtis
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you, Curtis, for stopping by; and the very kind words. Drop in again.
Comment from Angel Debbie
I like this love poem
flows great and smoothly
nice rhymeing and so right for a love contest.
Thank You for sharing this wonderful write.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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I like this love poem
flows great and smoothly
nice rhymeing and so right for a love contest.
Thank You for sharing this wonderful write.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Oh my! Thank you for the 6 rating and the very kind words.
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You deserve it. Have a great weekend!
Comment from Rhona18
Charming a- just charming. Another poem I can't write reams about because there is nothing to say except-delightful and charming - the last thing I want to do is try and pick holes in it. There aren't any.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Charming a- just charming. Another poem I can't write reams about because there is nothing to say except-delightful and charming - the last thing I want to do is try and pick holes in it. There aren't any.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Oh my! Thank you for the 6 rating and the very kind words.
Comment from millieone
I think your poem reads like you have found that special someone in your life... The descriptive method in which you write suggests that it may have taken some time but all turns out well. I like the rhyme and rhythm
Millie x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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I think your poem reads like you have found that special someone in your life... The descriptive method in which you write suggests that it may have taken some time but all turns out well. I like the rhyme and rhythm
Millie x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your very kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.