New life
A gentle thought about a good report17 total reviews
Comment from Nebukadneser
Carolyn this is so beautiful, me chick with the diamonds in her hair. I can only imagine the relief you must have felt after receiving some good news for a change. Your description is so apt it brought tear to my own eyes - you naughty, you.
Well done
You write with the hands of an angel
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Ps - I cannot find your poem - Martini and what is the name of your featured poem?
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Carolyn this is so beautiful, me chick with the diamonds in her hair. I can only imagine the relief you must have felt after receiving some good news for a change. Your description is so apt it brought tear to my own eyes - you naughty, you.
Well done
You write with the hands of an angel
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Ps - I cannot find your poem - Martini and what is the name of your featured poem?
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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New life was actually inspired by my sisters news, and dedicated to all cancer survivors. So far I have escaped the 'non respecter of person' C word. I'm not sure which poem you mean? My portfolio will show all post. Have a great day (or probably evening there in SA) :-) Carolyn
Comment from rjuselius
this is such a simple poem put in simple words. you don't always have to find words of difficulty. it works as it is.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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this is such a simple poem put in simple words. you don't always have to find words of difficulty. it works as it is.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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And thank you Rebekka for the comments. You are appreciated, Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
The last three lines say it all. Great format and and pacing in this thankful poem. Excellent word choice with the assonance of grate(ful) and stain.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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The last three lines say it all. Great format and and pacing in this thankful poem. Excellent word choice with the assonance of grate(ful) and stain.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks, as usual for your nice review. Carolyn
Comment from Lena Borghi
What an uplifting message and reminder of hope! I have been a part of a moment like this with a loved one, and also, unfortunately, of one not like this subsequently. I can truly appreciate this and think it a lovely thing that you thought to write about it. I love the vertical structure of the write. Well suited to represent the tears of joy.
Thank you for sharing this.
:) Lena
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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What an uplifting message and reminder of hope! I have been a part of a moment like this with a loved one, and also, unfortunately, of one not like this subsequently. I can truly appreciate this and think it a lovely thing that you thought to write about it. I love the vertical structure of the write. Well suited to represent the tears of joy.
Thank you for sharing this.
:) Lena
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thank you Lena for such a wonderful review. Maybe one day our survivor list will be longer than our victims list. I'm glad you liked the poem. Carolyn
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Comment from gypsycaravan
Your artwork and poem ring true for me. I am a survivor 2 times over. Two different types of cancer --once in 1963 and the other type in 1997. I am very blessed, living largely and loving to write. Thanks for posting and reminding me to be grateful, enjoy each day and say thanks to Him each day.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Your artwork and poem ring true for me. I am a survivor 2 times over. Two different types of cancer --once in 1963 and the other type in 1997. I am very blessed, living largely and loving to write. Thanks for posting and reminding me to be grateful, enjoy each day and say thanks to Him each day.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thank you for sharing your story. Please know that you are loved, Carolyn
Comment from visionary1234
What a sweet write, Carolyn. It seems that if you're a "survivor" you're far more conscious or your own mortality than most people, AND far more grateful for life. Blessings for this lovely piece!
:)Sharyn
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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What a sweet write, Carolyn. It seems that if you're a "survivor" you're far more conscious or your own mortality than most people, AND far more grateful for life. Blessings for this lovely piece!
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Sharyn, thank you for the insightful comments. You are appreciated, Carolyn
Comment from Gungalo
Wet spots
on clothing
leave no stain
Very good Notes and certainly has more to say than ever thought. I wonder where it all goes to, eh? So wonderful.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Wet spots
on clothing
leave no stain
Very good Notes and certainly has more to say than ever thought. I wonder where it all goes to, eh? So wonderful.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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I'm glad you liked it. Prayerfully, day our list of survivors will exceed the list of victims. Thanks, Carolyn
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Smile girl.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well writtne notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this poem about survivors crying happy tears. i love the picture. it was perfect....
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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this is very well writtne notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this poem about survivors crying happy tears. i love the picture. it was perfect....
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your insightful review. You are appreciated. Carolyn
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is very well written a great tribute to those survivors in the world today well done my friend sorry still playing catch up well done on this write regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Hello my friend this is very well written a great tribute to those survivors in the world today well done my friend sorry still playing catch up well done on this write regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thank you Jill,for the wonderful comments. Don't worry I am behind too. Hope you are feeling well. Carolyn
Comment from lakeport
New life indeed it wound be nice if one can have a new life
after the old one runs out, that's a loveluy expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, lakeport.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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New life indeed it wound be nice if one can have a new life
after the old one runs out, that's a loveluy expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, lakeport.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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I appreciate your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Carolyn
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your welcome Carolyn,Hugs!lakeport.