Comment from
bhogg
Very nice! Unusual to see a 5-7-5 couplet. Strong emotions shown in both. I do these short forms from time to time, for the discipline of making every word count. Bill
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
Comment from
Black_Oxygen
Always, forever
I promise my endless love
Eternally Yours
With very few words, this poetry transports the
reader to a loving place. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
Thank you for taking the time to rate my first piece
Comment from
Evelyn Fort Stewart
Love that is straight from the heart is priceless, no amount of money can buy it. I am 86 years old and my parents have been gone for many years but I think of them fondly every day and can't wait to join them on heaven's shore. Good poem. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
May God bless you. We will all reunite in heaven someday. Thank you! God bless