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Faith

Always

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Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
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Beautifully written and equally presented.. True message found in this FAITH acrostic. Well done. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
    Thank you
Comment from rama devi
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Very effective single word acrostic with single-word lines! Well chosen and impacting. However, I did feel it slightly redundant as forever, always and timeless all mean basically the same thing. I recommend altering at least one usage.

As the form is correct, no stars deducted. It may be a stylistic choice to be repetitive, and that is not 'wrong. However, in a work of such intense brevity, redundancy does not fit in well, IMHO.

Example edit (feel free to use)

Forever
Amazed
In
Timeless
Hope

Love the presentation. I have used that artowkr, too, on more than one occasion.:)

Good luck.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
    Thank you for your review, Yes I do see what you mean regarding all the words having the same meaning, so have now changed it, please take another look
reply by rama devi on 14-Feb-2013
    Nice! :)
Comment from Angels27
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Beautiful Acrostic poem. Faith is indeed timeless hope. Once we do lose faith the mere act of surviving becomes a chore. Smple yet profound lines.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
    Thank you