Comment from chasennov

Excellent

'3 Wishes.' This is a fine piece of writing and you certainly have structured this well. The formulation is good and it also has a strong extension to the narrative. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you chasennov

reply by chasennov on 13-Feb-2013

You are most welcome to my review.

Comment from shelley kaye

Good

[3 wishes] <-- three should be written out

I picked three wishes
The first one was for you
The second and third
Have already come true

so i take it, the second and third wish was for "you" as well?

a cute little love poem - kinda like what you'd read in a greeting card

it's nice but i feel something is missing (hence the four - sorry)

- thank you for sharing :)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thanks

Comment from vapros

Excellent

A great Valentine verse,PJ. It would not be easy to express all that is there, in less than twenty words. It comes and goes quickly, leaving some loving thoughts behind. Be well and keep writing.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you

Comment from Siouxsun

Excellent

Short and Sweet syllable dictated 5 6 5 6. Combined with rhyming second and last line. Simple and direct. What type is this

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you

Comment from Papabearua

Excellent

I like your poem. It is simple and straight foreward.
A sweet love poem in only 22 syllables.
All that the writer wishes for is found in her lover.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you