Comment from mystery poet

Excellent

Looks like you have done a swell job with this
form. Nice work from start to finish. The Photo
is no longer with the poem but am sure it's a
sight to behold. Thank you for sharing these
lovely words of perfection.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

The picture is there. Thanks Mystery for the review.

reply by mystery poet on 16-Feb-2013

Thanks, I didn't see it, I'll take
another look.

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

I like this piece. The words bring the photo to life as the message is clear and to the point. The rhyming and the rhyme scheme is good. This piece flows well as the passion is felt by the reader. Good job.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

Thank you Righteous.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

I believe you have accomplished an admirable goal. Well put together with scriptural truth of God being the author of perfection and we do see it throughout creation as if it were tiny mirrors of His vastness and beauty. Good job!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you Gracie Ann

Comment from LaDonnaCole

Excellent

You must really love this poetry writing! I am amazed at the complexity and stringent format that you had to follow.

This could easily be a song.

My favorite stanza:
The world spinning in control
Within a universal role
One little portion of the whole
Within gravity's protection
At the Creator's election

Love it. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you LaDonna. This style was often sung.

Comment from tedanytime

Excellent

Wonderful words combined in this complex form. You keep track of all the rules spinning this verse delightfully well.

You have acknowledged the Creator's control of the universe. His Word holds it all together. You have held this poem together, daresay with the gift He created in you.

Receive my praise for this colorful piece.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you Tedanytime, yes I love the gift and am grateful.

Comment from David Graham

Excellent

Don't know if you did it, I don't care, because I liked this poem very much. I like the life message it contains. In today's wired world of instant gratification, it is such a pleasure to slow down and look at the world. Very good job.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you David Graham

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

You show skill well in this Mr T. I am most impressed with the quality of the rhyming all flows so well and never seemed forced Yes you are a verbal painter thats for sure

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thank you Tarnished. Your not too bad yourself

Comment from Imn2writingstories

Excellent

You are right there is perfection all around us and some feel they have to be that way. I think your poem is well done and perfection to me is what we see it as in life.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thanks lmn2, so true.

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

What a lovely piece that brought me enormous enjoyment. I will leave the structure up to yourself. I would be begging for mercy if I were to write something with hard rules. "This is such an amazing world When its secrets are first unfurled ." It most certainly is ;)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013

Thanks Artemis

Comment from Joannforsberg

Excellent

So true. Very nice type of poetry form. I some day shall attempt some of these other forms. Off to watch my grandchildren for a few days. So, if I do not review poems it is because I have no computer.

Blessings, JO

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013

Thanks Jo. Enjoy the young o es.