Confused
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Comment from Jean Hornby
This is an unusual piece, it talks about lost interest , giving up and so describes this in simple words, such as ' your words rush over me '. It is a short poem but straight to the point
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This is an unusual piece, it talks about lost interest , giving up and so describes this in simple words, such as ' your words rush over me '. It is a short poem but straight to the point
Comment Written 24-Feb-2013
Comment from EMB
Okay, I do get the gist of what this little piece is trying to say, but I'm a bit puzzled about the title because it doesn't seem to match what the final word is saying. There is a need for these words. That's what I'm getting. What's the confusion?
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Okay, I do get the gist of what this little piece is trying to say, but I'm a bit puzzled about the title because it doesn't seem to match what the final word is saying. There is a need for these words. That's what I'm getting. What's the confusion?
Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Thank you,that was a first effort. Hence the title, confused.
Comment from Bobbi22
Good use of a simile to describe the feeling of being confused. While the poem is in correct syllable count, the structure seems forced with the hanging "your words" in the second line. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Good use of a simile to describe the feeling of being confused. While the poem is in correct syllable count, the structure seems forced with the hanging "your words" in the second line. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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You are completely correct. I appreciate the feedback.
