Comment from Graceheart

Excellent

I have loved exactly like you described here and I still anm caught in the great chasm of dark lonliness! I gave it all and failed, I threw my whole heart into this love and watched it crumble to pieces! For what? Just the most wonderful, beautiful, delightful, sensual, sexy, witty, perfect Lady of ALL! Thank you for stirring this in me, it is true and so deeply moving! Truth is, I shall stay broken and wait in the hopes that one day she'll come and fix me up right!!!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2005

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Excellent. "Open your spirit to fan the flame" and "scuff off that tarnished desire" Nice choices of words throughout this work. Many. I think this is one of your best...Bob

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2005

Comment from spades1

Excellent

I love both the poem and the message, I think we could all read this one from time to time. Thanks again for another wonderful poem. Tim.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2005

Comment from Louanne

Excellent

You are really cooking these days?
Your mind is so active. Do you sleep
at night or just dream poems?
I need some of that action.

Another nice one. Good job, dear.
Are you sure this is just 2-a-day?!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2005

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

very nice uplifting powerful poem
beautifully written
great imagery!

thank you for sharing
and thanx for the smile :-)

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2005

Comment from sengwriter

Excellent

Hope I've found you Jewell in more than two poems today, your attempt of writing in quantity doesn't make any compromise with its quality. It's really very tough job to perform. Here so bold is your philosophy of life. You encourage a love to arise, you entice a passion to flame into fire and also you boost up a lost heart to rejuvenate. Oh really grand. With all my cool, I feel so very inspired by your poem what to say....LOL
"Open your spirit
to fan the flame
of fervor and passion
to love without shame "
Gautam.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2005

Comment from michael paski

Excellent

I felt entertained the entire way through. I think you have an obvious talent for writing and urge you to continue. I especially liked this one, keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2005

Comment from Gremlinsmom

Excellent

Another poem, that makes like five in the last few days, that I feel like I was meant to read. I'm am trying to do just this right now....Only live once....so true. Great poem, Jewell!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2005

Comment from Black Wren

Excellent

This is good.
I love the way you call for people to live their lives fully.
I also like how you call them to live their dreams but not to be too quick about it.
After all, if you live your dreams too quickly you will have nothing left to dream about.
A very beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2005