Comment from Curt Mongold

Good

I am a bit dense today, so perhaps it is just me, but the stool reference leaves me wondering what it has to do with peeping at your thoughts. Also, the word "swear," is it meaning you sweared, or does it mean you swear it broke?
One spag-- you need a space between up and to.
Best wishes,
Curt

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013

Thanks for your views. Next time I'll make sure to be more clear.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Aww Analyser this is a cheerful bit of fun this morning. I have always believed these short to the point poems are the hardest. Yours is grand. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013

this was my first post. thanx for such enthusiastic response. it is surely going to build up my confidence as a writer.

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 28-Jan-2013

You've got the vibe...an honor to respond to such a piece of writing. xoxo Kiwi

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013

thanks again.