Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

On a broken clock, time stops the moment it broke down.
But the biological clock in us continue ticking even when we are broken down, stopped by life's sorrows or sufferings.
It continue on and on.
The time in our mind can swing back to the past in memories and it can wake us up to the realities of life in the present moment.
We must never let the this biological clock stops or our life will end. When it swings back and forth and forth and back, we will continue the journey irrespective.
Good imagery of time and how it affects our lives.
Cheers, Ritchiesszzky.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013

thanks, cheers

reply by 9999pool on 28-Jan-2013

Hi Billy,

You are most welcome.

I have just started a multi-author book and would be honored if you can add your touch to say something about that person we loved or even hate, in a chapter or two.

This book can be our joint effort to share among the Fanstorians as a memory or memoir that we can keep.

To add a chapter or two follow this link:

http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=586620

and then click "Add Chapter".

No rules to this book, any title and any form of writing about someone. I will review all chapters in the book.
Cheers, Ritchie.

Comment from Curt Mongold

Excellent

Sometimes I feel like a broken clock, but even then I am right twice a day they say! A very nice entry into the contest, the requirements are met well, the structure is sound and I wish you the best.
Curt

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013

thanks a lot, appreciate it

Comment from eowyn0003

Excellent

I like your play on words. I don't understand the last line: with a broken clock. Is this just poetic hyperbole or am I missing something?

Lura

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013

Thanks, I suppose I was saying that time still moves on, no matter what.