Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from nutcase
Breasking away now get away from the DARK SIDE... Live is just toooo darn bright think of a triple rainbow and all the awe you would be in when you enjoy it for the first ime and even the fifty time. Its always a work of God to help bring you back to see the shinny side of life again and forever MORE... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT>>>>>>> WOW OOOOOHHHH WOOOOWWW
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Breasking away now get away from the DARK SIDE... Live is just toooo darn bright think of a triple rainbow and all the awe you would be in when you enjoy it for the first ime and even the fifty time. Its always a work of God to help bring you back to see the shinny side of life again and forever MORE... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT>>>>>>> WOW OOOOOHHHH WOOOOWWW
NUTCASE WAS HERE
Comment Written 20-Apr-2005
Comment from fly4hi
I think you wrote a wonderful poem about
living and learning, making lemonade out
of lemons, etc. If we are to be who we should
be, we must learn and grow daily. You have
stated this truth very beautifully. :} fly
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I think you wrote a wonderful poem about
living and learning, making lemonade out
of lemons, etc. If we are to be who we should
be, we must learn and grow daily. You have
stated this truth very beautifully. :} fly
Comment Written 20-Apr-2005
Comment from spades1
Thanks for sharing, I love your poem here, The imagery and flow are beautiful indeed. I really dig yopur style regardless of genre and this was of course no exception. Thanks again. Tim.
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Thanks for sharing, I love your poem here, The imagery and flow are beautiful indeed. I really dig yopur style regardless of genre and this was of course no exception. Thanks again. Tim.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2005
Comment from Graceheart
Bravo, Bravis, Bravo, Wonderful, magnificnet, this is one of your best ever!!! You have poured heart and sol into these words of living wisdom and have given Your readers a masterpiece for all times! Perfect in every way full of your hearts embraces! Loved it with all my heart!
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Bravo, Bravis, Bravo, Wonderful, magnificnet, this is one of your best ever!!! You have poured heart and sol into these words of living wisdom and have given Your readers a masterpiece for all times! Perfect in every way full of your hearts embraces! Loved it with all my heart!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2005
Comment from Lainee
JJ you have met the challenge in an outstanding manner my friend. The beat and meter of this one glides along wonderfully as your thoughts unfold. A truly beautiful piece of writing JJ.
Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)
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JJ you have met the challenge in an outstanding manner my friend. The beat and meter of this one glides along wonderfully as your thoughts unfold. A truly beautiful piece of writing JJ.
Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2005
Comment from Louanne
Brava, bravissima!
This is very good.
You did a fantastic job
in the upbeat ending.
I really like it. As for
the 3 words, Mission,
more than accomplished!
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Brava, bravissima!
This is very good.
You did a fantastic job
in the upbeat ending.
I really like it. As for
the 3 words, Mission,
more than accomplished!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2005
Comment from sengwriter
It is more than expected, I must say. So you've fulfilled yours and I remain yet to fulfill mine. Your poem is a positive outcome with a strong optimistic outlook. An encouragement for the people growing old and very sensitive about their rising age as you told at the last Laughter,Hope for a brighter tomorrow and joy whatsoever at any expenses just to fight our pains, more beautifully you wanted to take help of those past sweet memories to help you. The beautiful pic above has really enhanced the value of the poem, but basically the poem stands strong on its own for what you accept all my kudos. LOL :o) Gautam.
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It is more than expected, I must say. So you've fulfilled yours and I remain yet to fulfill mine. Your poem is a positive outcome with a strong optimistic outlook. An encouragement for the people growing old and very sensitive about their rising age as you told at the last Laughter,Hope for a brighter tomorrow and joy whatsoever at any expenses just to fight our pains, more beautifully you wanted to take help of those past sweet memories to help you. The beautiful pic above has really enhanced the value of the poem, but basically the poem stands strong on its own for what you accept all my kudos. LOL :o) Gautam.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2005
Comment from shelley kaye
well i believe you have passed this challenge with flying rainbows lol
and, yes, it is very understandable as well as relatable... well written with LOTS emotion and excellent flow and rhythm.... the only thing i noticed, maybe use question marks on the questions? just a thought :-)
thanx for sharing :-)
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well i believe you have passed this challenge with flying rainbows lol
and, yes, it is very understandable as well as relatable... well written with LOTS emotion and excellent flow and rhythm.... the only thing i noticed, maybe use question marks on the questions? just a thought :-)
thanx for sharing :-)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2005
Comment from clhutchinson
This poem is eloquent in its portrayal of life's perceptions. It carries great words of wisdom, beautifully describing the pros and cons, and giving words of encouragement to see things in a brighter light. You have done well meeting the challenge presented to you.
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This poem is eloquent in its portrayal of life's perceptions. It carries great words of wisdom, beautifully describing the pros and cons, and giving words of encouragement to see things in a brighter light. You have done well meeting the challenge presented to you.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2005
