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Viewing comments for Chapter 81 "Sunshine after the rain."
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hello. Wish I could have read more. You have an exceptional rhyming scheme here. The word anguish is nicely placed in relation to "blight" Sunshine evaporates the rain has a really nice ring. Cheers.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
    Thank you so much for your lovely review as always Benjamin. :) Jaq x
Comment from elliejean
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Sunshine after a rain is Gods way of giving me hope. I need both rain and sunshine to live.I dance in the rain and bask in the sun. Great work.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
    Once again many thanks elliejean :)
Comment from Galactia
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Delightful poem reflecting grief and pain and loved how it all rhymed and flowed beautifully.

Great job and GL in the contest

Regards
tia

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
    Thank you so much Tia x
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
    Thank you so much Tia x
Comment from Capricorn30
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Sunshine so easily replaces sadness and dismay, as so finely expressed in your well-written contest entry, mystery writer;
I like the "a" assonance in "evaporates the rain"

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
reply by Capricorn30 on 27-Jan-2013
    You're very welcome:)
Comment from Kingsland
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This poem starts out in a very negative mode and ends up being very positive, this is a well written piece of poetry with a very good message in its thoughts and phrases... John

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
    Much appreciated Kingsland, I wanted to depict a journey from sadness to happiness.
Comment from L. Sherman
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Just made it at 15 words. Good for you! This is a lovely poem, despite the opening few words. Very uplifting and I like the casual sound of the rhymes as you read. Very crisp and clean.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2013

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
    Thanks for your great review it was meant to sound like someone refusing to let the darkness keep them down.