Daddy Explodes
Daddy 's acting mighty odd; recognize the symptoms?28 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
Another good laugh and more. I'm betting most of us on FS recognize the symtoms. Great bit about reviewing wife's letter and rating it three stars. Also the bit about rhyming. Bet this isn't too far from the truth. Yeah, I remember how happy I was the day I exploded. :-)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Another good laugh and more. I'm betting most of us on FS recognize the symtoms. Great bit about reviewing wife's letter and rating it three stars. Also the bit about rhyming. Bet this isn't too far from the truth. Yeah, I remember how happy I was the day I exploded. :-)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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You're my hero! And you're right, it's not too far from the truth, especially this week. It's been COLD up here on Cape Cod. Nothing like warming your hands around a booted up computer. Best to you, Shari! Dennis
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I love Florida! :-)
Comment from jjstar
Hahahaha...It must be FS addiction week? Too funny! Again, welcome to the world of FS addicts. It's a good thing for me. Last week my husband got so sick of looking at our dirty house he vacuumed and dusted. Yesterday, I almost fell over on my face. My teen son had done the dishes, mopped the kitchen floor, which I haven't done since Christmas. He proceeded to tell me how gross the kitchen counters were, so he found some Lysol wipes and cleaned like a maniac!
It's working for me...lol
GREAT JOB!
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" Oh sure.==need to squish the quote and Oh together. :)
Then he draws 3 stars at the top!" ===welcome to my world lol..
Pour some white milk, drink it down like white silk."===pfft...that's pretty good...
" Oh, it doesn't===same thing...
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Hahahaha...It must be FS addiction week? Too funny! Again, welcome to the world of FS addicts. It's a good thing for me. Last week my husband got so sick of looking at our dirty house he vacuumed and dusted. Yesterday, I almost fell over on my face. My teen son had done the dishes, mopped the kitchen floor, which I haven't done since Christmas. He proceeded to tell me how gross the kitchen counters were, so he found some Lysol wipes and cleaned like a maniac!
It's working for me...lol
GREAT JOB!
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" Oh sure.==need to squish the quote and Oh together. :)
Then he draws 3 stars at the top!" ===welcome to my world lol..
Pour some white milk, drink it down like white silk."===pfft...that's pretty good...
" Oh, it doesn't===same thing...
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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You might make a fortune selling a book telling wives/Moms how to motivate their husbands and sons to do what you have done by mere benign neglect! Thanks, always appreciate your comments, Dennis
Comment from Gladness
Very cute, I caught on when he corrected her note, ha ha. It is a disease I think. Yes, I have it too. The only thing my family wants though, is for me to publish a best seller.
Best to you, Anita
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Very cute, I caught on when he corrected her note, ha ha. It is a disease I think. Yes, I have it too. The only thing my family wants though, is for me to publish a best seller.
Best to you, Anita
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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And you can do it! Thanks, glad you like it!Dennis
Comment from Louise Michelle
Haha! This is a good one, Dennis. I think that little old wifey should be grateful her husband isn't looking at porn.
I loved your notes as well.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Haha! This is a good one, Dennis. I think that little old wifey should be grateful her husband isn't looking at porn.
I loved your notes as well.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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By saying "this is a good one" are you implying that some I have written are NOT GOOD? You KNOW how sensitive,nay, paranoid I am and yet you do THIS to ME! The slightly lifted eyebrow, betraying skepticism of the most hurtful kind to a sensitive soul... then the barely concealed superior smirk of one who has been published!!!
Loveya LOU! :) Dennis
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OMG! I'm about ready to strangle you, lol. Yesterday I was feeling a bit under the weather,yet I made the effort to catch up with some postings. I saw that you had two and said to myself, "Self, you better read at least one of them or Dennis is going to be hurt."
I'm getting ready to read your next one. Keep in mind it's very early in the morning; I didn't sleep well.
I managed to fight off what little bug was trying to infiltrate my imune system yesterday, but now I'm concerned that you might bug me to death, haha.
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See! Your anger at me was used by your immune system to fight off the baddies trying to take over your body! I think you owe me! But I'm calling it even since I owe you for putting up with me! LOL Glad I was able to rally the good troops in your beleaguered immune dealee. Love you, Denis
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I am so punchy from lack of sleep. I don't even know why I just posted. I'm going back to bed to try to catch a few winks. Later, Lou
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, hope you are better soon. Sleep tight! Dennis
Comment from visionary1234
oh this is deliciously funny Denniz! NOTHING AT ALL APPLICABLE TO ME OF COURSE!!!! :)))))))))))) Just ask my poor husband. But then again, I rationalize, he's into his blood, guts'n gore TV shows which bore me to tears ... look upon it as revenge ... :))
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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oh this is deliciously funny Denniz! NOTHING AT ALL APPLICABLE TO ME OF COURSE!!!! :)))))))))))) Just ask my poor husband. But then again, I rationalize, he's into his blood, guts'n gore TV shows which bore me to tears ... look upon it as revenge ... :))
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Of course, nothing applies to YOU! You are as normal as ... as ... ME! Which is REALLY scary ! Thank you, you are SUCH a doll to stop by and sprinkle star dust on my humble offering Dennis, your adoring fan.
Comment from Connie C
This is so funny but also a little scary. I see something of myself in this story of yours, Dennis, me being the Dad. That last quote of the Dad's is hysterical. You have quite a knack for writing these dialogue-filled stories. Keep them coming!
Connie
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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This is so funny but also a little scary. I see something of myself in this story of yours, Dennis, me being the Dad. That last quote of the Dad's is hysterical. You have quite a knack for writing these dialogue-filled stories. Keep them coming!
Connie
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Thank you Connie! Always a delight to find that you enjoy some of my stuff! God bless you, Dennis
Comment from angelmagnet
delightful and funny. So good that you, yourself. What a gift
you kept me going until the end of the story. Nice work. Keep on keeping on.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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delightful and funny. So good that you, yourself. What a gift
you kept me going until the end of the story. Nice work. Keep on keeping on.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Thanks, I really appreciate your comments. Dennis
Comment from gypsycaravan
Absolutely darling story and the formatting great for easy reading. Thank you for that. The piece is technically perfect, I feel and hope it adds to YOUR explosion. Nice work.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Absolutely darling story and the formatting great for easy reading. Thank you for that. The piece is technically perfect, I feel and hope it adds to YOUR explosion. Nice work.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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You want me to blow up? Is that nice? Just kidding! I did explode and this was a shameless celebration of that event. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it! Dennis
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Wow. Huge high-five and congratulations on the blow-out, er., is that blow-dry? Oh yeah, explosion. :-)
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umm, are you implying anything about hot air here? Thanks!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Funny! Dad is becoming a poet and his family doesn't recognize it. Maybe that's not so funny. Kinda sad, actually. The family's always the last to know.
Left out a couple of commas below:
"Hi Bill Honey!"- Hi, Bill Honey!
"Hi Daddy!"- Hi, Daddy!
A fun story. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Funny! Dad is becoming a poet and his family doesn't recognize it. Maybe that's not so funny. Kinda sad, actually. The family's always the last to know.
Left out a couple of commas below:
"Hi Bill Honey!"- Hi, Bill Honey!
"Hi Daddy!"- Hi, Daddy!
A fun story. :) Nancy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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And a good poet as well! After all, silk and milk? Eh? Thanks for reading and commenting!
Comment from words
Yes, I do recognize those symptoms, Dennis.
I have many friends suffering from the same ... the same obsession. LOL
And if this is true of you, then congratulations are in orders have 500 fans! I was RECOGNIZED three times yesterday and today I am EXPLODING!"
Hugs, and congrats, d
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Yes, I do recognize those symptoms, Dennis.
I have many friends suffering from the same ... the same obsession. LOL
And if this is true of you, then congratulations are in orders have 500 fans! I was RECOGNIZED three times yesterday and today I am EXPLODING!"
Hugs, and congrats, d
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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The 500 fans isn't true but it's made up for by you! Oh oh! Thinking in rhyme, every time! Help! I am "exploding" however, a fact as amazing to me as to many of my reviewers! Thanks for reading, reviewing. Dennis LOl
