Daddy Explodes
Daddy 's acting mighty odd; recognize the symptoms?28 total reviews
Comment from Cecil Beckett
Nice all dialogue story. Sometimes I found it hard to follow but with further reading it made perfect sense. Great sense of humor with the ending. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Nice all dialogue story. Sometimes I found it hard to follow but with further reading it made perfect sense. Great sense of humor with the ending. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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That reread works for me too. Thanks for taking the time and for your kind review. 😃
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I caught on at "note editor" and giggled the rest of the way through your essay. This is a great conversation only story. Have received some pushback from the family, especially when I'm giggling or wiping tears. At first they thought I was watching kitten videos, a no-no in our house as our seven-year-old boy ends up sobbing inconsolably, "They are so cute!" I've now confessed to my addiction.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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I caught on at "note editor" and giggled the rest of the way through your essay. This is a great conversation only story. Have received some pushback from the family, especially when I'm giggling or wiping tears. At first they thought I was watching kitten videos, a no-no in our house as our seven-year-old boy ends up sobbing inconsolably, "They are so cute!" I've now confessed to my addiction.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Now I feel guilty for being an enabler! Fortunately, your generous six star gift and gracious review help assuage my pain. 🤣
May your son always have a tender heart🥲That is so sweet!
Comment from GE Parson
All that comes to mind for comment on this ?? is
HA! HA! HAAAAAAA!
Although P.S. I am hard of hearing, and sometimes when my "better-half" tells me something, she sounds like she is speaking in a forign langue. Jerry
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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All that comes to mind for comment on this ?? is
HA! HA! HAAAAAAA!
Although P.S. I am hard of hearing, and sometimes when my "better-half" tells me something, she sounds like she is speaking in a forign langue. Jerry
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Great to have you back on here, brother, and helping you get a laugh is a real plus! God bless, Dennis
Thank you Dennis for your uplifting comment -Jerry
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Comment from Kooky Clown
I read this with delight as it started to sound in some parts like me, my computer is upstairs and I often sit up there composing rhymes and come down talking in rhyme or trying to think of words that will rhyme. It made me chuckle and I will have to be careful the situation doesn't get any worse
Kooky.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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I read this with delight as it started to sound in some parts like me, my computer is upstairs and I often sit up there composing rhymes and come down talking in rhyme or trying to think of words that will rhyme. It made me chuckle and I will have to be careful the situation doesn't get any worse
Kooky.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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Sounds like it might be too late,
And friend, be sure, that ain?t great! 🤣Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from prettybluebirds
You sure gave me a chuckle with this writing. Is it possible that we do become addicted to the FanStory site? I quit for a couple of years and now here I am again. Oh No! Do you think I'm getting a relapse or something? Advise me, please. LOL Great writing. I really enjoyed this piece.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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You sure gave me a chuckle with this writing. Is it possible that we do become addicted to the FanStory site? I quit for a couple of years and now here I am again. Oh No! Do you think I'm getting a relapse or something? Advise me, please. LOL Great writing. I really enjoyed this piece.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Thanks, so glad you enjoyed it. I go through times of staying away, but then I come back. It?s an expensive site but it?s the most effective for getting reactions. Some nice folks on here as well.Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Judy Lawless
Another witty piece of writing, Deni. You've described just about all of us on here, except for the 500 fans! I don't think I could keep up with that many because I'd feel obliged to review all their work. lol Thanks for another chuckle.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Another witty piece of writing, Deni. You've described just about all of us on here, except for the 500 fans! I don't think I could keep up with that many because I'd feel obliged to review all their work. lol Thanks for another chuckle.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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You?re welcome and thanks for reviewing!
Comment from royowen
That's probably you Dennis, I can't believe it's any of us, we are so cool dear brother. Seriously though, that sounds a lot like like when I was first here on fanstory, I sometimes got into hot water with the gospel police, but things ate a little easier now. Great sense of humour, and creative soul God has given you Dear friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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That's probably you Dennis, I can't believe it's any of us, we are so cool dear brother. Seriously though, that sounds a lot like like when I was first here on fanstory, I sometimes got into hot water with the gospel police, but things ate a little easier now. Great sense of humour, and creative soul God has given you Dear friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Yes, I found some negative feed back as well, but they soon drop away. Then we find the people of God who encourage and rejoice.
Like Brother Roy, for instance. 😁✝️❤️🙏
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Oh yes indeed, there are not so many of them, even secular writers here are kind by enlarge, bless you bro.
Comment from Wendy G
Brilliant - I love your story. Unfortunately I think I have the disease as well, and it definitely affects the brain. Symptoms continue through the night as well, making for disrupted sleep. Unfortunately I don't have as many fans, but fortunately I am not exploding, although I am very hot (as they say)! Maybe it's just a fever .... Excellent writing, thank you for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Brilliant - I love your story. Unfortunately I think I have the disease as well, and it definitely affects the brain. Symptoms continue through the night as well, making for disrupted sleep. Unfortunately I don't have as many fans, but fortunately I am not exploding, although I am very hot (as they say)! Maybe it's just a fever .... Excellent writing, thank you for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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I?d go with hot. We writers have fragile egos re are scribbles so any port in a storm. For instance, to hold you over until you explode on FS, I will give you six imaginary stars for your review of my attempt to overcome many a fizzle which I thought might sizzle. 🤣
Comment from T B Botts
Hi Dennis,
No explosions here, not even a mild fart, but that's OK. I have enough problem with my ego here anyway. This is blasted addictive. To hell with FaceBook, if you have Fan Story, you have all you need. This is seriously cutting into my television watching time. Good job buddy.
Happy Thanksgiving.
Tom
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Hi Dennis,
No explosions here, not even a mild fart, but that's OK. I have enough problem with my ego here anyway. This is blasted addictive. To hell with FaceBook, if you have Fan Story, you have all you need. This is seriously cutting into my television watching time. Good job buddy.
Happy Thanksgiving.
Tom
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours as well! Hope the knee is coming along and you are literally back on your feet without wincing. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I can relate. Especially now, having been confined to my room for 8 days thus far on account of corona. I wince whenever I give 5-stars to a one-liner bumper-sticker, available on Amazon in your choice of four color combinations. So clever--thanks for the chuckle.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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I can relate. Especially now, having been confined to my room for 8 days thus far on account of corona. I wince whenever I give 5-stars to a one-liner bumper-sticker, available on Amazon in your choice of four color combinations. So clever--thanks for the chuckle.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Sorry, hope you are feeling well soon! I?m bumper sticker guy and sometimes tailgate to read the fine print. Not the ideal way to get a grasp on theology but for some, the only contact with God. Have a blessed Thanksgiving!
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Nothing against bumper stickers or clever T-shirt slogans--they just don't cut it as "poetry"! An exceptional one-liner that is truly poetic is Moonlight Skylarking, by JuliaSJames--check it out and tell her I sent you!
