Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in good form and I just love the play on words with the literal reading of the figurative idiom beside themselves
Save yourself some grief and drop the upper case letters in case some of the Japanese form experts visit your poem :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013

Thank you for reviewing and for the advice. Bill

Comment from bard owl

Excellent

My husband is an identical twin and I know how close he and his brother are in the way they think and do things. The word play is right on! Excellent senryu! Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013

Thank you for your kind and encouraging review. Bill

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

Twins feel everything each other feel I hear very good poem I like the line 'besides themselves' this is a good admonition of twins thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013

Thank you for your kind and encouraging review. Bill

Comment from Saucey

Excellent

Lol, boy what a play on words, the flow is right, the pic is an appropriate dandy and I absolutely love it, made the few words pop and play. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013

Thank you for your kind review. Bill

Comment from Kevin C

Excellent

I love this. I know twin girls and they are like that. Great image in so few words that read so well. You definitely gave me a chuckle with this well written senryu.
Thank you for sharing.
Kevin

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2013

Thank you for your kind review. Bill

Comment from terry drake

Excellent

Flirting play with your words. I enjoyed the presentation and the was the senryu was written. You did a fine job on your presentation and I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2013

Thank you for reviewing me. Bill