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Comment from ndadarose
This poem is very unique and quite creatively done. The poem shaped in a sphere representing earth and its creation enhances the rich language used in describing the creation of the universe.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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This poem is very unique and quite creatively done. The poem shaped in a sphere representing earth and its creation enhances the rich language used in describing the creation of the universe.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Thank you ndadarose.
Comment from PoesyPoet
What a very wonderful and very unique shape poem. The story of the earth was a most nice to read and my pleasure to review. PP
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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What a very wonderful and very unique shape poem. The story of the earth was a most nice to read and my pleasure to review. PP
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting and reviewing.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Good creative work here, very instinctive and philosophical too. A journey beyond the earthly. Good delivery of the process of creation. Nice work.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Good creative work here, very instinctive and philosophical too. A journey beyond the earthly. Good delivery of the process of creation. Nice work.
ola thomas
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2013
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Thank you Ola for the review and nice rating.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Great verse wonderful, wonderful presentation with picture, form and presentation. You have the ability to present verse and song in one. Your message is clear and the meter and verse is smooth. An enjoyable read.
Robin :)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Great verse wonderful, wonderful presentation with picture, form and presentation. You have the ability to present verse and song in one. Your message is clear and the meter and verse is smooth. An enjoyable read.
Robin :)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thank you Robin. That one took a lot of time.
Comment from Curt Mongold
I like the shape of the poem, and the content is quite descriptive and imaginative. A great description of how we believe it all started, and where we are now. What will be our future? Only the universe can know.
Enjoyed the reading
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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I like the shape of the poem, and the content is quite descriptive and imaginative. A great description of how we believe it all started, and where we are now. What will be our future? Only the universe can know.
Enjoyed the reading
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Thanks Vurt.
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Vurt says you are welcome.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow. What descriptions. I could picture each step as you described it. The insight was very interresting and I read it over a few times to really absorb the enormity of it. this was great and the way you typed it was artistic
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Wow. What descriptions. I could picture each step as you described it. The insight was very interresting and I read it over a few times to really absorb the enormity of it. this was great and the way you typed it was artistic
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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I am so pleased by this stellar review. thank you.
Comment from EMB
Hmm. Where'd the speck come from, bro. (I'm just giving you a hard time. :)) This was a terrific poem on multiple levels. You do a great chronicling how we got from a speck to everything that exists, ending with man. But what must have taken the most effort is figuring out where to cut your lines to create the earth-like sphere. I can only imagine, and I'm impressed.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Hmm. Where'd the speck come from, bro. (I'm just giving you a hard time. :)) This was a terrific poem on multiple levels. You do a great chronicling how we got from a speck to everything that exists, ending with man. But what must have taken the most effort is figuring out where to cut your lines to create the earth-like sphere. I can only imagine, and I'm impressed.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Thank you Edward for your insight and humor. I played with words, phrases. and re- arranged for hours and hours until I was satisfied. I also tried with blue versus green lettering.
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Good call with the green. Definitely.
Comment from trimple
Excellent this thoughtful creation of your Tom
Very clever the way you managed to create the sphere, although I must admit the luminious squint green did throw me a bit.
But the poetry here is very interesting and well put together
Kind regards Trimple :)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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Excellent this thoughtful creation of your Tom
Very clever the way you managed to create the sphere, although I must admit the luminious squint green did throw me a bit.
But the poetry here is very interesting and well put together
Kind regards Trimple :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much, trimple.
Comment from Joannforsberg
The round sphere does show. Well done free verse. The ending causes awe as you state these took over earth. Then man. For all the miracle of creation we take this earth for granted. Beautifully done. JO
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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The round sphere does show. Well done free verse. The ending causes awe as you state these took over earth. Then man. For all the miracle of creation we take this earth for granted. Beautifully done. JO
Comment Written 17-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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Thanks Jo
Comment from mystery poet
It must have taken some powerful concentration
to to perfect this beautiful oval using the
specific letter count to perfection. You have
created a word of words and good job of it.
I like how your creation developed line by
line. Nice, indeed!
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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It must have taken some powerful concentration
to to perfect this beautiful oval using the
specific letter count to perfection. You have
created a word of words and good job of it.
I like how your creation developed line by
line. Nice, indeed!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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Thank you Mystery. Yes, this took some time to create.
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It's very creative. Glad to have
read and reviewed...MP
