Leavened with Love
a stunning rebirth59 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Once again you have out done yourself. You have such a gift with words. This was a really masterfully written account of Sauls conversion. Only exception is Saul was told by the Lord to go to Ananias on Straight Street. But all else is so well done. Thanks for sharing.
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Once again you have out done yourself. You have such a gift with words. This was a really masterfully written account of Sauls conversion. Only exception is Saul was told by the Lord to go to Ananias on Straight Street. But all else is so well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Hi, Rox. You have highlighted the danger of using Wikipedia for a reference LOL.
Thank you so much for your awesome review and words of encouragement. I am truly honored.
Hugs, Bev
Comment from AprilShower
This is an interesting account of Saul's journey to Damascus. It appears this started out as flash fiction but did not fit the requirements. Flash fiction is not easy to write. You did well in showing us how this story could have happened, though.
April
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This is an interesting account of Saul's journey to Damascus. It appears this started out as flash fiction but did not fit the requirements. Flash fiction is not easy to write. You did well in showing us how this story could have happened, though.
April
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much, April. Yes, the art of the flash seems to elude me LOL. Xx Bev
Comment from c_lucas
Like all Bible Stories, the conversion of Saul/Paul has been more etheral than it was. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Very well written.
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Like all Bible Stories, the conversion of Saul/Paul has been more etheral than it was. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Very well written.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much for the generous review, charlie. I always enjoy getting your unique perspective. Warmest regards, Bev
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You're welcome.Bev. Will this post become a novel.
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I hadn't thought of it, Charlie, but you've given me something to think about. I was a huge fan of Taylor Caldwell - a master of biblical fiction in my mind. :0)
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Taylor Caldwell admitted she channeled "The Physician," then denied it when she came under fire. A writer should be willing to stand by their statements, or keep they mouth shut and pen idle.
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Yes, I read Jess Stearn's book on the sessions with Taylor. The reincarnation bit made some sense, she seemed to have an amazing feel for the times. And I agree with you, Charlie, stick with your story.
:0) Bev
Comment from Joy Graham
I love the idea of translating a story from the bible into a fictional story. It was great to see it all up close through your words. Well done :)
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I love the idea of translating a story from the bible into a fictional story. It was great to see it all up close through your words. Well done :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Joy, thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate your generous and encouraging review. Hugs, Bev
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I never grow tired of studying the life of Paul. Your rendition of the conversion account is a bit fictitious( as the writing prompt requires) but certainly nails the fact that he, without the light of the Lord was lost. It is an amazing thought to be in his shoes. To be dedicated to ridding the world of people of the way and then to become an apostle, one borne out of season,to tell of Jesus' redeeming grace. The 16 epistles by Paul is a 'review' none of us should miss. What a great post. Carolyn
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I never grow tired of studying the life of Paul. Your rendition of the conversion account is a bit fictitious( as the writing prompt requires) but certainly nails the fact that he, without the light of the Lord was lost. It is an amazing thought to be in his shoes. To be dedicated to ridding the world of people of the way and then to become an apostle, one borne out of season,to tell of Jesus' redeeming grace. The 16 epistles by Paul is a 'review' none of us should miss. What a great post. Carolyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thank you much, Carolyn. As the scholars, themselves, have differing interpretation of Paul's blinding conversion, I thought it best to write from a perspective that layman and folks like yourself can relate to. Thanks for confirming that was a good choice. I appreciate it very much!
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Writingfundimension,
An unusual version of the conversion of Saul, but an interesting take on it. Well written tale, with a literal use of the KJV 'scales' which is the nearest the translators could get to the meaning of the Greek words that meant a blindness not unlike what we would call cataracts ...
Nicely done.
Patrick
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Hi Writingfundimension,
An unusual version of the conversion of Saul, but an interesting take on it. Well written tale, with a literal use of the KJV 'scales' which is the nearest the translators could get to the meaning of the Greek words that meant a blindness not unlike what we would call cataracts ...
Nicely done.
Patrick
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Hi, Patrick. I was hoping to get your take on this. It seems that no two scholars can agree on the details of the blindness, but cataracts makes the most sense to me. Thanks for a great review, my friend.
Warmest regards, Bev
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The NT Greek is a bit vague on it and the KJV scholars more or less did a 'literal' interpretation rather than trying to understand the medical sense of the description - not surprising really given the state of medical 'knowledge' at that time.
Patrick
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I agree. What did make some some sense to me was the the suggestion his blindness was psychological and his conversion gradual. I think I like the spectacular version better. :0)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow! You write with such power and authority in this, dear woman. Not a word wasted, and your descriptions are fabulous. The dialogue is even better - I felt the essence of the times, as if I were there. This is a wonderful story, and you have very real characters too. It's a shame you could not enter this - I'd bet the farm you had a winner! (Bev, I'm so darn sorry; it's only Tuesday, and once again you've caught me with no sixes! This is SO worthy...)
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Wow! You write with such power and authority in this, dear woman. Not a word wasted, and your descriptions are fabulous. The dialogue is even better - I felt the essence of the times, as if I were there. This is a wonderful story, and you have very real characters too. It's a shame you could not enter this - I'd bet the farm you had a winner! (Bev, I'm so darn sorry; it's only Tuesday, and once again you've caught me with no sixes! This is SO worthy...)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Dawn, your wonderful words are worth a dozen stars to me. And I do understand about the sixes - I'm out, too! Thank you so much for your encouragement and keen insights. I always love your reviews! Hugs, Bev
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You are so gracious, my buddy - always understanding! Thank you - we follow too many good writers...LOL
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Aw, that's so sweet, Dawn. And I agree completely - too many good writers! XXX Bev
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Bev, First I must say I really cannot remember the historical biblical reference. Some parts vaguely familiar but not enough to help me in this post.
So I read it just as a story or struggle, ego, falling and then rebirth.
What I loved about this piece was I didn't need the biblical context to get the deeper message from this work.
Often I find it frustrating when I can't pull information from my left brain it is a difficult challenge to surrender to.
Yet with this being so strong on its own foundation I was able to relish in the work itself.
Exceptionally penned and intriguing, a thought provoking piece that has me reflecting even as I write this review.
Thanks so much for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Hi Bev, First I must say I really cannot remember the historical biblical reference. Some parts vaguely familiar but not enough to help me in this post.
So I read it just as a story or struggle, ego, falling and then rebirth.
What I loved about this piece was I didn't need the biblical context to get the deeper message from this work.
Often I find it frustrating when I can't pull information from my left brain it is a difficult challenge to surrender to.
Yet with this being so strong on its own foundation I was able to relish in the work itself.
Exceptionally penned and intriguing, a thought provoking piece that has me reflecting even as I write this review.
Thanks so much for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Maureen, you have touched me deeply with your kind words and generosity. I so appreciate your ongoing support and encouragement. You are truly a blessing in my life. Hugs, Bev
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
I really enjoyed your fictional account of the conversion of St. Paul. Very vibrant writing and excellent use of descriptive words to create the atmosphere of Saul/St, Paul's inner struggle and that of the other characters, Jude, Nadine and Ananias. Well written.
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I really enjoyed your fictional account of the conversion of St. Paul. Very vibrant writing and excellent use of descriptive words to create the atmosphere of Saul/St, Paul's inner struggle and that of the other characters, Jude, Nadine and Ananias. Well written.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review, Schalk. I appreciate your taking time to read! Warmest regards, Bev
