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Comment from rod007
Great motivational poem. Keep the great memories of the past and learn from the bitter memories that has hindered us in the past. Live for now and use our memories as the tools to make our life better and wholesome. Just some thoughts that came to my mind as I read your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Great motivational poem. Keep the great memories of the past and learn from the bitter memories that has hindered us in the past. Live for now and use our memories as the tools to make our life better and wholesome. Just some thoughts that came to my mind as I read your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thank you rod007, great review.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
A very lovely thought expressed by your verse, and so true. Each day we begin anew. Easy rhythm and rhyme that makes for a very enjoyable read.
Interesting picture. Your book must be getting pretty fat by now. Good job my friend. Robin :)
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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A very lovely thought expressed by your verse, and so true. Each day we begin anew. Easy rhythm and rhyme that makes for a very enjoyable read.
Interesting picture. Your book must be getting pretty fat by now. Good job my friend. Robin :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
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Thank you Robin. This will make number 23. I figure I need about 50 to make a reasonable adult book.
Comment from FLutterodt
Yes. That is the way to do it - start a new journey at the turning of the guard. A lovely poem; great for encouraging people on New Year's Eve. I like the rhymes and the simplicity of it. The picture and choice of colors also work very very well. Well done
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Yes. That is the way to do it - start a new journey at the turning of the guard. A lovely poem; great for encouraging people on New Year's Eve. I like the rhymes and the simplicity of it. The picture and choice of colors also work very very well. Well done
Comment Written 14-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise, uplifting poem has a direct simplicity I find appealing and refreshing. Yes, so much of what's wrong in one's life CAN be fixed if that person really wants a better life!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Your concise, uplifting poem has a direct simplicity I find appealing and refreshing. Yes, so much of what's wrong in one's life CAN be fixed if that person really wants a better life!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thank you Janice
Comment from L. Sherman
A lovely poem about making the most of the present. It's true, there's nothing to be done about yesterday. The best we can do is live in the now and plan accordingly for the morrow.
Lovely.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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A lovely poem about making the most of the present. It's true, there's nothing to be done about yesterday. The best we can do is live in the now and plan accordingly for the morrow.
Lovely.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thank you L Sherman
