And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Walk"A collection of Spirtual poems
8 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written there is so much around us that we take for granted today forgetting the reason why it is here it was created by god well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Hello my friend this is well written there is so much around us that we take for granted today forgetting the reason why it is here it was created by god well done regards Jill
Comment Written 12-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your kind remarks. You are so right. Carolyn
Comment from Allison78
What a very beautiful poem you have written! This is so peaceful and serene. I love the imagery and calm feeling I get when I read it, well done!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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What a very beautiful poem you have written! This is so peaceful and serene. I love the imagery and calm feeling I get when I read it, well done!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much Allison, You are appreciated and I am glad you like the poem. It was a joy to write. Good Night, Carolyn
Comment from 4tulips
I am glad you shared this poem with us as you tell about taking a walk in God's creation of nature. The line that I really enjoyed was the line near the end that said," Compared to forever Today took no place" Wow, that was one of those "gotcha" moments for me. Because it is so true. A day here is going to seem that it never took place. Forever in a perfect and peaceful setting that we are waiting for one day will indeed be so magnificent that we won't really remember these days here now. I really appreciated your words and effort into making this fine poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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I am glad you shared this poem with us as you tell about taking a walk in God's creation of nature. The line that I really enjoyed was the line near the end that said," Compared to forever Today took no place" Wow, that was one of those "gotcha" moments for me. Because it is so true. A day here is going to seem that it never took place. Forever in a perfect and peaceful setting that we are waiting for one day will indeed be so magnificent that we won't really remember these days here now. I really appreciated your words and effort into making this fine poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment. I love writing and sharing, especially about the One who created us all. Sincerely, Carolyn ps: you might want to read Inspired, it was the first poem I posted. Hope you like it also.
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Compared to forever
Today took no place
'Twas but a gracious reminder of
His Eternal Embrace
This poetry transports the reader to a tranquil place.
I really like the flow of this piece. It holds the
reader's attention from star to finish. Thank You
for your creation.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Compared to forever
Today took no place
'Twas but a gracious reminder of
His Eternal Embrace
This poetry transports the reader to a tranquil place.
I really like the flow of this piece. It holds the
reader's attention from star to finish. Thank You
for your creation.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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I thank you so much for the wonderful review. I'm glad you liked it. It was a joy to write. Kindest regards, Carolyn
Comment from Slayde
I dont care for these spiritual writings most of the time but this one was well written. Not over simplified and direct to the point.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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I dont care for these spiritual writings most of the time but this one was well written. Not over simplified and direct to the point.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your candor and that you think it was well written. You are appreciated, Carolyn
Comment from dmt1967
I liked this format and style I liked the way it flowed and the smooth way it read I liked the fact the poem didn't need a picture thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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I liked this format and style I liked the way it flowed and the smooth way it read I liked the fact the poem didn't need a picture thank you for sharing
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Thank you for comments and encouragement. Most of my poetry is very visual. I like to let the individual reader capture their 'picture' with regard to their own frame of reference. You are appreciated. Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
A lovely spiritual and natural setting which I find always stimulates the soul.
Well penned and with strong imagery your reader feels this work more deeply.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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A lovely spiritual and natural setting which I find always stimulates the soul.
Well penned and with strong imagery your reader feels this work more deeply.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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You are welcome, Maureen. It was a joyful experience to write this poem. I appreciate your comments and encouragement. Good Night, Carolyn
Comment from Gert sherwood
Heelo and smiles to you . notesandmore
Yes as you said there a many times we shoul take a walk and mediate about the beauty of creation I like this part of your poem--
Compared to forever
Today took no place
'Twas but a gracious reminder of
His Eternal Embrace
(which of course is heaven)
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Heelo and smiles to you . notesandmore
Yes as you said there a many times we shoul take a walk and mediate about the beauty of creation I like this part of your poem--
Compared to forever
Today took no place
'Twas but a gracious reminder of
His Eternal Embrace
(which of course is heaven)
Gert
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Thank you, Gert for your wonderful comments. I am glad you liked the poem. You are appreciated, Carolyn