Comment from expressions9

Excellent

Your haiku poem truly tells a story of the yearly plight of birds, leading them to take flight. Great photo - a bird with a suitcase? :)

Well done on an excellent piece!

Christine

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013

Thanks Christine, the picture was just a bit of fun. :) Much appreciated. :)

reply by expressions9 on 12-Jan-2013

You're welcome :) I loved the picture :)
Christine

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I live in Wisconsin and up until a couple years ago I thought ALL birds flew south. That is until I started working in retail and I learned that people spend hundreds of dollars on bird food so the birds who do stay have food. Great job with this and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013

Thanks so much WIVA and many thanks for your good luck wishes. :)

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

as winter winds howl 5
no shelter or food for birds 7
they fly off down south 5

Great litle haiku reflecting birds migrating with season.

GL in the contest

Regards
tia

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013

Thanks for another fine review Tia. As always a pleasure to hear your thoughts.

Comment from stanzasandstuff

Excellent

This is a well written haiku and the syllable count is spot on. Loved the photo too. Too cute!It's just my opinion but I think a capital letter at the beginning of a line makes the poem look more professional. Good luck!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013

Thanks a lot for reviewing my poem :). I didn't think a Haiku had capital letters, now I'm not so sure. :) Much appreciated.