Comment from trimple

Excellent

This type of poety must take a long time to work out
aside from this I found the wording of this great writ
to hold my attention entirely from start to end
fabulous!
well done
Kind regards trimple

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013

Thank you trimple, I appreciate your reviews,

Comment from rod007

Excellent

Very good poem but to be honest with you I did not really understand it or the structure. From my review of your writing I do not think this form really mirrors you talent.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013

I tend to agree that this style is not great, thought I'd try it, it is extremely hard to pull off.

Comment from poetbear

Excellent

Great photo.
The feeling and flow are solid.
Reads well and make sense.
I like this format and it definitely leaves an impact.
Nice technique and writing.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013

Thank you so much poet bear.

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013

Thank you so much poet bear.

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013

Thank you so much poet bear.

Comment from Joannforsberg

Excellent

First the photo is stunning from your own personal collection. Light upon the angel is at a perfect angle. This seems like it would be a difficult format to write. To take words that you can reverse, yet keep the same meaning, I am impressed. If I had six stars left I would have given you one. Blessings, JO

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013

Thank you Jo, it is quite hard.

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

A Palindrome Poem which is simply brilliant and so fresh in its presentation format. Skills are needed to bring out the read to be "the same backwards as forward". Now that is a new form of interesting way to write. Good write and simply brilliant about the peace of mankind and the wisdom it begets us. Cheers, Ritchiesszzky.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013

Thanks Ritchiesszzky , it was hard to do, I'm not such I like it yet.

reply by 9999pool on 08-Jan-2013

Hi Thomas,

It is hard to dissect whether a poem is like by others or not. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. The reason that is poem is fresh from the oven in its format and presentation, it has be innovatively good. I always say: It it is not bad, then let it be good (positiveness in thought). Try a few more and you may like it after a while. Takes time to get use to something new in poetry. Cheers, Richard.

Comment from Jacqueline1616

Excellent

Very very well done!! This seems as though it would be very hard to do!

Peace
Bring it May
People to Love All
Give Mankind to Wisdom Great
Arms Gentle Us Enfold
Sins away Take

Pray

Take away Sins
Enfold us Gentle Arms
Great Wisdom to Mankind Give
All Love to People
May it Bring
Peace


I have never tried this. Great job!!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013

Thank you. It was hard.

Comment from dancerwriter

Excellent

Love your picture. Must admit when first reading this, it confused me , until I saw your notes. But why write a poem back to front then the right way again afterwards.Is there a reason for this. You are very competant.Am rating the message which is worthy of a good rating. Lesley.j.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013

I just saw the style in the poetry dances section and thought I'd try it. It wasn't easy, and the examples shows were probably better. But thank you so much.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

A very interesting format indeed. Lovely verse forward or backward. Another great picture from your collection.
Robin :)

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013

Thanks Robin. This was pretty hard. Not sure I like it yet, but an Ok first try I think.