Comment from spades1

Excellent

I love the picture and I love the poem though I muct admit to not being so good at the art of being still, thanks for sharing. This is a great poem and of course another great read. Tim.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2005

Comment from Jaxson Phoenix

Excellent

It is strange how deafening silence can be. Another great work from a gifted artist. I love the photo and wish the views from my back yard were as lovely and inspiring. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2005

Comment from Graceheart

Excellent

Silence does shout...it also whispers of the one true love two souls shared! This is a lovely poem of your gorgeous and caring heart! You give so much to your readers, your love is like a beam of light to those searching for truth! Thank you for these beautiful words of light!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005

Comment from sengwriter

Excellent

Again I find those beauty in your poem after a long gap. May be it's poem dedicated to a person, I feel it's an encouragement for every body who have seen the face of silence in closeness. Silence has got the strength of reviving that you taught us through this poem. Great really great. Keep it up. Gautam

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Another good rendering from you. I am running out of superlatives for your writing. Many people I know would be better off heeding your suggested beautiful but instructive lines...LOL...Bob

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

"be still"

great message!
well written with excellent flow and rhythm
very understandable


great job!

thanx for sharing :-)

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005

Comment from EmileJP

Excellent

The author suggest that we need to take time to unwind from our cares and surrender to the piece of silence. Pause within life to make time for quite reflection to get back in touch with ourselves and the basics of life in general. Close out the world of noise and welcome the tranquillity of silence and refresh the body and the mind within its sanctuary from the chaos of reality. Your words float within our conscious minds and land gently within our hearts.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005

Comment from Malli Shimura

Average

Very nice. It is however, I feel, a little plain. It sounds like another poem I have read. Overall it is a good piece. I like how you made it spiritual and calm. It is very nice. I hope to read more of your work.

---Malli Shimura

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005

Comment from Louanne

Excellent

The beautiful photo fits well
with your thoughts on silence.
You are an ace photographer
among your many talents,
my dear!

Nice job!

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Thanks for your thoughtfulness
and for reminding me to take
my camera with me! I will see
what I can do.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005