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Comment from BeasPeas
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Excellent poem and theme. What we need to do to protect the future of our country. Unfortunately, spendaholics are in power and cannot be reined in. Let's hope they take your advice.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
    There's always hope. Thanks BeasPeas.
Comment from bard owl
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The way Congress has conducted itself as of late, I can only feel embarrassed at how our democracy is seen by the world, not to mention our votes and wallets. Thoughtful senryu. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
    Thank you bard owl. I feel the same.
Comment from quicksandyamurray
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That is a good point. They say the best people to talk to are those that live by good example. We voting for them, but they don't seem to sustain good examples once they are in. Human nature I guess. Point well said in the confines of a 5-7-5.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
    Thank you quicksand, greed and power seem to take over,
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hello. Very good message and picture attached. I didn't know we had a Congress anymore. I thought the executive had taken over and spent like there was no tomorrow left. Loved the message though. Good luck and cheers.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
    Hah! Very much true about that. Thank you Benjamin.
Comment from bhogg
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I've thoroughly enjoyed the entries to this contest. It has brought some hidden angst to the forefront. I saw on the news today that Obama claimed we don't have a spending problem. Oh well.... Bill

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2013
    Thanks Bill, I haven read any others yet, but I'm looking forward to it.
Comment from MAMONIA
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I'm am somehow grateful not to be in the next
generation. Between social security, medicare
and job shortages, it is a hassle.
Hopefully, our young will have the advantage of
a higher education and surpass our expectations.
I have good reason to believe this.
Very clever! Your picture also says a thousand words.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2013
    Thank you Marie. I hope your right.