And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Faith"A collection of Spirtual poems
31 total reviews
Comment from Allison78
This is such a fantastic poem you have written about faith. It is so moving and and has such profound promises. The rhymes are wonderful. I wish I could give you a six!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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This is such a fantastic poem you have written about faith. It is so moving and and has such profound promises. The rhymes are wonderful. I wish I could give you a six!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Thanks Allison, I appreciate your wonderful review. (I will take the ssix in my heart, if that's ok) I am glad you related to the poem. Carolyn
Comment from dmt1967
I am glad hope ad glory found you and you have faith and inner peace very well written and epic picture good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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I am glad hope ad glory found you and you have faith and inner peace very well written and epic picture good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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And thank you for reading and commenting. Fan art always amazes me with such wonderful work. Best wishes always, Carolyn
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Beautiful poem of faith! I love this line: Forever heart bells ring
The music from one's heart is likely the kind God prefers to hear. :)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Beautiful poem of faith! I love this line: Forever heart bells ring
The music from one's heart is likely the kind God prefers to hear. :)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Thank you Phyllis, I appreciate your insightful review. I agree with you, making melody in our hearts to the Lord. Have a great weekend. Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
Nice message of faith. Love the 'Decibels of glory sing.' I used to sing in our choir. We are justified. Love that verse. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Nice message of faith. Love the 'Decibels of glory sing.' I used to sing in our choir. We are justified. Love that verse. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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And thank you for such a lovely review. I am glad you liked 'Faith', Carolyn
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The Bible instructs us to "Make a joyful noise unto the Lord." Your poem speaks movingly and sincerely of God's grace and mercy--which we don't deserve.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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The Bible instructs us to "Make a joyful noise unto the Lord." Your poem speaks movingly and sincerely of God's grace and mercy--which we don't deserve.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Thank you Janice, I appreciate your insightful comments. Carolyn
Comment from AnonymousWisdom
"acapela" needs two l's.
"Mercy" doesn't need to be capitalized.
But this was a very pretty and poetic expression of faith. Great job and good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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"acapela" needs two l's.
"Mercy" doesn't need to be capitalized.
But this was a very pretty and poetic expression of faith. Great job and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your observations and comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Rmocruz
An excellent short spiritual poem.
A comforting religious theme.
Title and message reinforced
by repetition. "Faith" beginning
the closing line.
A pleasure to read.
Rich.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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An excellent short spiritual poem.
A comforting religious theme.
Title and message reinforced
by repetition. "Faith" beginning
the closing line.
A pleasure to read.
Rich.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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Thank you rich for the great review. I am pleased you liked the poem. Carolyn
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You are very welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from Black_Oxygen
With very few words, this poetry has a powerful
message. I uses non-confusing language making it
easy to read and understand. Thank you for your
creation.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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With very few words, this poetry has a powerful
message. I uses non-confusing language making it
easy to read and understand. Thank you for your
creation.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2013
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And thank you for the sweet review. I enjoyed writing 'Faith'. Carolyn
Comment from GarthL
Liked the musical opening, acapela harmony is so great to hear, and heart bells ringing certainly is a lovely analogy of inner peace. It's a beautiful picture of contentment you so lyrically paint. Well done for a good poem and for finding your faith justified. Good luck in the contest.
LoveLight'n'Peaceto you, Garth
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Liked the musical opening, acapela harmony is so great to hear, and heart bells ringing certainly is a lovely analogy of inner peace. It's a beautiful picture of contentment you so lyrically paint. Well done for a good poem and for finding your faith justified. Good luck in the contest.
LoveLight'n'Peaceto you, Garth
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thank you Garth, I appreciate your insightful review. Best wishes to you, Carolyn
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Cheers, it was delightful!!
Comment from ravenblack
nice hymn to faith. your words seem to build to crescendo just like a chorus of intense music. not to mention, as a personal statement of faith, it is inclusive.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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nice hymn to faith. your words seem to build to crescendo just like a chorus of intense music. not to mention, as a personal statement of faith, it is inclusive.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the insightful review. Best wishes, Carolyn