Crystal Spirits
a nonet26 total reviews
Comment from Candyjean
Earths sleeping soul, I love that line. A very nice poem and a great little message. Thank you for posting, it worked for me.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
Earths sleeping soul, I love that line. A very nice poem and a great little message. Thank you for posting, it worked for me.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
I am already depleted of my sixes otherwise you would have one for this gem. Great nonet with some very spellbinding and captivating lines-'delicate white descending life forms capture the heavenly guidance of sending God's angelic crystal spirits alive.' Wow! Holly
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
I am already depleted of my sixes otherwise you would have one for this gem. Great nonet with some very spellbinding and captivating lines-'delicate white descending life forms capture the heavenly guidance of sending God's angelic crystal spirits alive.' Wow! Holly
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from poetic1988
beautiful poem
I like the imagery that comes into my mind from reading line four & five
in line five that line has me think of today actually when snows covers the ground & streets & the picture helps with the picture that comes to my mind
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
beautiful poem
I like the imagery that comes into my mind from reading line four & five
in line five that line has me think of today actually when snows covers the ground & streets & the picture helps with the picture that comes to my mind
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks for taking time to read and review. Elaine
Comment from wordsareus
This is a beautiful nonet. The image is striking and the back round and font colors you chose enhance your poem nicely. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
This is a beautiful nonet. The image is striking and the back round and font colors you chose enhance your poem nicely. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Rondeno
Not only do you follow the rules of the nonet form accurately, but you deliver a poem which speaks eloquently of the beauty of snowflakes.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
Not only do you follow the rules of the nonet form accurately, but you deliver a poem which speaks eloquently of the beauty of snowflakes.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Matthew M.
It is really a wonderful thing to experience that beautiful snow. Each flake is unique and I think your poem expresses this well. It is amazing how bright snow is when it covers the ground.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
It is really a wonderful thing to experience that beautiful snow. Each flake is unique and I think your poem expresses this well. It is amazing how bright snow is when it covers the ground.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is well written a beautiful poem in the nonet form with so much imagery and feeling I enjoyed this beautifully presented piece regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
This is well written a beautiful poem in the nonet form with so much imagery and feeling I enjoyed this beautifully presented piece regards Jill
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from bossmyers
Nice job, I love the snow and I think that sitting and watching it snow is one of the most peaceful things to do. I like the comparisons of crystal spirits, jewels ... That they are! Thank The Lord for snowy days and peaceful thought.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2013
Nice job, I love the snow and I think that sitting and watching it snow is one of the most peaceful things to do. I like the comparisons of crystal spirits, jewels ... That they are! Thank The Lord for snowy days and peaceful thought.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from nancy_e_davis
They say no two snowflakes are the same. Lovely nonet. Good alliteration in delicate descending. Arriving as Gods angels. Blanketing the earth sleeping soul. Becoming jewels
glowing bright. Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
They say no two snowflakes are the same. Lovely nonet. Good alliteration in delicate descending. Arriving as Gods angels. Blanketing the earth sleeping soul. Becoming jewels
glowing bright. Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the nonet and is beautifully illustrated
nice alliteration in delicate descending
I love the personification of the snowflake as God's angelic spirit in crystal form
and in the earth's sleeping soul - nice alliteration there, too
beautiful descriptive detail with a wonderfully joyous tone :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the nonet and is beautifully illustrated
nice alliteration in delicate descending
I love the personification of the snowflake as God's angelic spirit in crystal form
and in the earth's sleeping soul - nice alliteration there, too
beautiful descriptive detail with a wonderfully joyous tone :-) Brooke
Comment Written 17-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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I am honored by your encouraging review. The nonet is one of my favorite poetic form. I am trying to see winter in a more positive light. Thanks for a great review. Elaine