Pumpkin's Rival
Plum fears that Pumpkin would take its place.25 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
hi sha lini, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 that is interesting. i am glad for the author notes because i was lost without them. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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hi sha lini, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 that is interesting. i am glad for the author notes because i was lost without them. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
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Thanks for your review and five stars
Comment from mruss1
Thought I'd stop by and check out some writing. This was both interesting and informative really had no idea about this. This is the thing others open other avenues for me allowing me to see through their eyes. Though I see a lot when I read someone else it opens my eyes to new posibilities.Eyes can be wide open but remain shut to things that are seen in a different light.The eye of the beholder can see many things if you first open your heart and then your mind. Take care and keep me posted when you write something new I will be glad to check it out:) Mark
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thought I'd stop by and check out some writing. This was both interesting and informative really had no idea about this. This is the thing others open other avenues for me allowing me to see through their eyes. Though I see a lot when I read someone else it opens my eyes to new posibilities.Eyes can be wide open but remain shut to things that are seen in a different light.The eye of the beholder can see many things if you first open your heart and then your mind. Take care and keep me posted when you write something new I will be glad to check it out:) Mark
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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The similarity is the birthday...16/9. Have you noted it?
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To be honest no but now I have:) Sometimes it takes me a bit longer and other times I need prompting:) It should be easy to remember anyways:) Mark
Comment from GWHARGIS
You have a strong sense of satire I'm thinking. This was very cute. My poetry us generally a bit rough around the edges and I don't like to follow the rules. Thank you for fanning me and I will return the favor.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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You have a strong sense of satire I'm thinking. This was very cute. My poetry us generally a bit rough around the edges and I don't like to follow the rules. Thank you for fanning me and I will return the favor.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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Thank you. You are always welcome.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely 5-7-7 poem written for the contest you entered. Has a lot of meaning. May I ask, Have you considered a photo to go with it? This would enhance the imagery of your poem and make it "pop" more. Peace, Deb
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Lovely 5-7-7 poem written for the contest you entered. Has a lot of meaning. May I ask, Have you considered a photo to go with it? This would enhance the imagery of your poem and make it "pop" more. Peace, Deb
Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Hello Deborah, Greetings. Thanks for spending your precious time to read my lines. Actually I thought to display it with a clown with his plum. I tried. but I'm not good in such skills. If you can please do it for me. Thank you again.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello Sha Lini. Interesting write and excellent use of ryhming scheme. The use of the plum and pumpkin as characters to try and gain favor is neat. Good luck and cheers.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Hello Sha Lini. Interesting write and excellent use of ryhming scheme. The use of the plum and pumpkin as characters to try and gain favor is neat. Good luck and cheers.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Hello Benjamin, Thank you. It's my first entry poem. It's the first review for the poem. Thank you again keep reviewing my works.
