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Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your dramatic presentation and additional details and reflections in your notes. I admired your five-line stanzas and rhymes plus use of alliteration in the second stanza. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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I enjoyed your dramatic presentation and additional details and reflections in your notes. I admired your five-line stanzas and rhymes plus use of alliteration in the second stanza. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan
Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thank you Joan
Comment from Jean Lutz
Lots delivered in this poem delivered in bold words, color scheme and artwork. Sadly not many will pay attention to your words of truth. Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Lots delivered in this poem delivered in bold words, color scheme and artwork. Sadly not many will pay attention to your words of truth. Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thank you Jean. You are so right, sadly.
Comment from Galactia
This is an excellent written poem.
Myan's didn't actually predict the end of the world in 2012, but the end of an astronomical sycle and begining of a new one, I believe it's the solar system cycle. we just left the era of Aquarius and now we are in the era of Capricorn (goat)and every new era, there's always a new deity or religion to worship. This Jesus was in the cycle of Pisces, hence the 2 fish. Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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This is an excellent written poem.
Myan's didn't actually predict the end of the world in 2012, but the end of an astronomical sycle and begining of a new one, I believe it's the solar system cycle. we just left the era of Aquarius and now we are in the era of Capricorn (goat)and every new era, there's always a new deity or religion to worship. This Jesus was in the cycle of Pisces, hence the 2 fish. Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Thank you Tia. I know, but many didn't ( the pundits).
Comment from L. Sherman
I always have massive respect for those who take on acrostic poetry that rhymes. I never seem to be able to get the words I need together; so kudos there.
More than that, it works well and the subject is appropriate for the times - though part of me still wishes 12/21/12 would've panned out. Ah well. Nicely done!
L Sherman
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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I always have massive respect for those who take on acrostic poetry that rhymes. I never seem to be able to get the words I need together; so kudos there.
More than that, it works well and the subject is appropriate for the times - though part of me still wishes 12/21/12 would've panned out. Ah well. Nicely done!
L Sherman
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much.
