Marshammallow
It's so so funny!3 total reviews
Comment from daniaa
I like it very very very much because I understand it with tow meanings first meaning the normal one to never trust people because they will eat you, but the other one I understand it that we should not trust Human.. So tell me which one you meant it ?? :) good job
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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I like it very very very much because I understand it with tow meanings first meaning the normal one to never trust people because they will eat you, but the other one I understand it that we should not trust Human.. So tell me which one you meant it ?? :) good job
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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thank you for your comment daniaa... i'm feeling very happy that you like my poem, but i'm very much sure that yours is better. Good day!
Comment from Scribbler67
Certainly original.
Unfortunately, this is the second entry I've come across today, which is not within specifications. A 5-7-5 is a three line poem with a total of 17 syllables in all.
This also has a number of typos and spelling errors, and is not all that funny.
A good effort though.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Certainly original.
Unfortunately, this is the second entry I've come across today, which is not within specifications. A 5-7-5 is a three line poem with a total of 17 syllables in all.
This also has a number of typos and spelling errors, and is not all that funny.
A good effort though.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your comment. I'm only 11, but thanks to you i'll find a way to improve my poem.
Comment from Rondeno
Hmmm ... Curiouser and curiouser. You know it's "they're always delicious", not "their always delicious", don't you? Marshmallows are female? Your fourth line is hard to understand. you've entered it for a competition featuring poems of three lines and seventeen syllables, when it contains nine lines and 113 syllables. I THINK this is a humorous poem, but ...
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Hmmm ... Curiouser and curiouser. You know it's "they're always delicious", not "their always delicious", don't you? Marshmallows are female? Your fourth line is hard to understand. you've entered it for a competition featuring poems of three lines and seventeen syllables, when it contains nine lines and 113 syllables. I THINK this is a humorous poem, but ...
Comment Written 26-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your comment. I've been really happy writing this poem and I THINK I may have had a lot of ideas on the fourth line becauase i'm not the kind that makes the writing... confusing. Thanks anyway!
