Comment from Reddy Rimer

Exceptional

The sixth star is for the cross shape.
This is a beautiful poem telling the story behind the birth of the baby. You have chosen your words well, and as a Christian, I know they are words of power. The names of Jesus are not to be taken lightly. I believe you have given them the dignity He deserves.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013

Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the six stars. I am humbled.

Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

He is the One, you so beautifully wrote of our Lord and Savior with words I am sure He sees. The picture takes my breath away just long enough to read this excellent piece.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012

Thank you Tomoral. Glad you liked it.

Comment from Jina Sarma

Excellent

how beautifully you explain your creative impulse! i feel very special whenever i read your poem. your thoughts are so unique. a spirituality is there in your poem.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012

Thank you Jina. You are most kind

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hello Treischel. I enjoyed your tribute to Jesus including your word sculpturing. I also liked the extra information on the author notes. Have a happy new year. Cheers.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012

Thanks Benjamin

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Treischel:

I love the word form of this poem as it reinforces
the reason Christ came to earth in the first place:
to die for our sins. I think too many people tend
to forget that during the Christmas season as if
the decision for Christ to die on the cross came
some time after He began his ministry.

thanks for sharing
I look forward to reading more of your work soon
love,
jan

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thank you Jan

Comment from Mai Mai

Excellent

This is a very nice praise piece. It fittingly makes note of who the Lamb is. Good work, good luck and may the coming year bless you with health, peace and prosperity.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thank you Mai. My you 2013 be blessed.

Comment from hopeflys

Excellent

I really like reading your poem. The words flowed beautifully together and I really enjoyed reading your work. Hopeflys 0:D

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thank you!

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your sincere spiritual poem effectively uses some of the Bible's many names for Jesus, the Messiah, the ultimate Sacrifice for our sins.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thank you Janice, may you have a blessed and safe new year.

reply by Janice Canerdy on 28-Dec-2012

Thanks You too. Janice

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I have known some who have had a lethal hate for themslves. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

That is a point well taken. Thanks for the nice review.

reply by c_lucas on 28-Dec-2012

You're welcome.

Comment from minopavlic

Excellent

To wait patiently and to trust in God when everything looks dark, is the lesson that we all need to learn. Heaven will not fail us in our day of adversity, for nothing is apparently more helpless, yet really more invincible, than the soul that feels its nothingness, and relies wholly on God.

No_obstacle

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thanks for the sermon and review.