Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

There is nothing like the pure and natural love between a mother and child. Its not a forced love it come easily. The picture goes well with the poem. Great choice of words. well done.. Deorre

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012

Thanks as ever Deorre for your kind review. :) Jaq x

Comment from hifein

Excellent

wonderful nonet that expresses the purest of love. you did a wonderful job adhering to form, selecting a lovely and appropriate graphic and using words that communicate your touching subject. enjoyed it. happy holidays.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012

Happy holidays to you hifein and thanks for your lovely review.

Comment from urska13

Exceptional

I absolutely love the poem and the picture. I love the form of it and how the words flow. More descriptive at the top and so strong at the bottom. It's just brilliant. I would however put a full stop after "mine". Just so, to maybe emphasize the end word. Just a little suggestion. Otherwise it is amazing. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thank you so very much urska13. I will indeed look at your suggestion. Your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq x

Comment from L. Sherman

Excellent

A lovely poem about the sudden and all-encompassing love a parent has for its child from the very first second of its existence (or before, depending on your ideas on birth and life). Well done.

L. Sherman

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thank you once again for the wonderful review. :) Jaq x

Comment from Elizabeth Daniels

Excellent

Yes, there is nothing quite like that first sight of a newborn baby. A true beauty. Good luck in the contest. Elizabeth Daniels.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thank you so much for your very kind review.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Pure Love indeed, that's a beautiful expressed poem,very nice in Nonet form, Beautiful picture. I enjoyed reading it,
God bless you. lakeport.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thanks lakeport appreciated as always.

reply by lakeport on 28-Dec-2012

your welcome.Lakeport.

Comment from Rondeno

Excellent

Hi, Jacqueline!

This is just about as good as nonets get. You even make it rhyme! And the subject is unassailable - the mother-child bond has to be the strongest emotion known to humans. Lovely!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012

Thank you so much for your kind words Michael. Much appreciated as ever. :) Jacqueline x