Poems
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Comment from adewpearl
your poem is in good syllable count for the tanka
good alliteration in firm fetters
and in malignant and mad
and good consonance of M sounds with firm and imaginings
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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your poem is in good syllable count for the tanka
good alliteration in firm fetters
and in malignant and mad
and good consonance of M sounds with firm and imaginings
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 27-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Brooke, Thank you for reviewing. Happy New Year!
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. A lot of people use poetry as a way of expressing just nice things. But there is malignant in all of us. Something we need to let out. Express your biggest fears and worst imagination in poems. It will make you feel great .
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. A lot of people use poetry as a way of expressing just nice things. But there is malignant in all of us. Something we need to let out. Express your biggest fears and worst imagination in poems. It will make you feel great .
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from zlp22
Interesting poem. Good word flow, a little hard to understand, but poetry is like that. Good luck in the contest, you should do well, great picture.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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Interesting poem. Good word flow, a little hard to understand, but poetry is like that. Good luck in the contest, you should do well, great picture.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from EMB
Hmm. Now this is certainly an interesting poem. At a glance, it seems to be saying that "I write so that I won't go crazy." LOL Well, I personally understand. You just have to "get it out" from time to time, right?
Nice one, Bill.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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Hmm. Now this is certainly an interesting poem. At a glance, it seems to be saying that "I write so that I won't go crazy." LOL Well, I personally understand. You just have to "get it out" from time to time, right?
Nice one, Bill.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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The implication of the title is that it might be true of many. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from eowyn0003
True to form. But you imaginings don't seem that malignant, mad perhaps, but not that malignant...no definitely not malignant. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you.
Lura
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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True to form. But you imaginings don't seem that malignant, mad perhaps, but not that malignant...no definitely not malignant. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you.
Lura
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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Thank you, Lura, for reviewing. Merry Christmas! Bill
Comment from doris1022
Bill good luck in the contest...nicely written poetry and no errors I see. i like the way you did that. Have the merry in your family this year and always.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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Bill good luck in the contest...nicely written poetry and no errors I see. i like the way you did that. Have the merry in your family this year and always.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and regards. Happy days! Bill